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by Anonymous

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by Cricket8802/06/11

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you have an exquisite way with story telling, a wonderous tale.

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by Anonymous10/31/12

Great!

I like the unusual and ambiguous ending.

The sex is a little lacking in detail, however.

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by Avaritia11/06/15

In love…

Know what I like about ur stories so far…? It's that they're like reading poetry and they hold a certain tune like song lyrics, though, without music... You don't try to force the image of a character or their world into your readers skulls like they should see it as you do but yet there's enough detail to form a picture…

Honestly I find your writing style beautiful and fasinating and I certainly hope you continue writing for a long time…

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