All Comments on 'Laurie's Lesson'

Dude this is a terrific build up, but why not continue onto some more juicy details, like her actually getting fucked, played with whatever! You could turn this into a 6 page novel for crying out loud! most of it being sex!

I love the main character and the way you describe him/her. Would definitely enjoy seeing an extension to this story and seeing her get what she deserves!