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Devil's Eve

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by Anonymous

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by Pistolpackinpete10/26/10

And then....

.....good or okay start but it fades to black rather abruptly eh?

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by Donkeepuncher10/26/10

Thanks for the comment pete

I agree that the beginning of my story is stronger than the end. Something for me to work on.

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by leathercatsuitgirl08/02/13

Delicious Story

Thank you for such a delicious, taboo & very kinky story - Satan, the Devil, Lucifer & all of his other names.

Stories about the Devil making love or raping women (especially fit, blonde, tight & toned married mum's like me) have always turned me on A LOT !!!!

Thank you for a lovely story once again

Sarah Leather, London England
leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

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