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kristoffkkristoffkover 13 years ago
Loved it

A lovely short story, beautifully written with a poignant twist in the tail.

kalodinkalodinover 13 years ago
Super

If this is your first you'e on your way. Like the construction of the narrataive and the tension introduced by the hint of familiarity theme. Do travel on! Kalodin

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