please, write something longer, more emotional, romantic story about mother and son. Put some drama you know?
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Anonymous10/27/10
bit straight forward
1. You are a decent writer, much better than some, not as good as others. Keep up the work, you get better as you go.
2. Part of these tales that make them so exciting is the illicit nature, the taboo of doing a relative, the fear of being caught. You give us none of this. Take your time, try to flesh it out a bit more. Just my $.02.
well two horny mothers got fucked by two horny sons
a nice little tale of lust and love....would have preferred that Paulas son got her pregnant and not the other one as that means he has two kids...next time it should be the other son gets them both pregnant...vice is nice but incest is best....
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please, write something longer, more emotional, romantic story about mother and son. Put some drama you know?
bit straight forward
1. You are a decent writer, much better than some, not as good as others. Keep up the work, you get better as you go.
2. Part of these tales that make them so exciting is the illicit nature, the taboo of doing a relative, the fear of being caught. You give us none of this. Take your time, try to flesh it out a bit more. Just my $.02.
6 out 5 stars
one of best good quik story I've read
well two horny mothers got fucked by two horny sons
a nice little tale of lust and love....would have preferred that Paulas son got her pregnant and not the other one as that means he has two kids...next time it should be the other son gets them both pregnant...vice is nice but incest is best....
how droll
another repeat of the shack theme...
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