Bathtime

very good stuff

I loved your story, it was realistic. I enjoyed every bit of it, i hope you write more.

very well written

very sexy

Very Well Written

I liked your story very much. It was well thought out and I do hope that you will take the time to write some other stories.

wow

i fingered my clit all through it, thanx for getting me sooo damn wet and my clits still hard!

Excelent

Thanks for the story. Made my girlfriend and I play with ourselves until we both shot our loads. Then we fucked and had 2 more orgasms.
Thanks. Keep on writing.

Julie and Mike

You got me so hot...

Thanks for this story..I had to play with myself as I was reading it...and imagined your cock hard as you wrote it..it got me so hot that I couldn't stop cummming..

Awesome

This story got me hot and got me off. Awesome job!

-Nikki

fanfuckingtastic!

that was one hot fucking story, write more, and give that hot fucking slut some more cock! I know brother will love it.

After

After reading this I went over to my girls house....she never knew what hit her.
-jim

hot stuff

Your stories are so engrossing that I keep feeling let down when I go to read the next chapter. Whatever you do to make the stories so great and so hot, keep it up!

RAWK ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dude, you've got the nack for writing erotic stories. SOOOOO hot and horny, I came twice! Keep up the good work and I'll be looking for more of your stories! -SpazticStud

incredible

that was absolutely amazing....incredibly hot and erotic, that should be on hbo or something omg i loved it!!!!!!!

Bravo!

very nicely done! i have read some of you other works, They are really good. Keep it up :)

awsome

u have a gift for writing stories this one made me really horny i cant wait for my bf to come home

Well written

Short and to the point--and hot as hell. Great stroke story, and I'm still hard after cumming!

that was a goodie

Still Rock hard, Glad the girls enjoyed it too, That gives me something else to ponder.
Look forward to more.

rocco

My God...

That was the fastest I've ever gotten off reading a story. The strongest I've ever gotten reading a story too, come to think of it. Thanks to you, I had to clean off the computer screen. Anyway, awesome story. Keep up the excellent work.

AWSOME

That story was awsome. I love you work I have read others, but this was the best so far. My girlfriend and I had the best sex ever after reading this story. PLEASE keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank You

Really juicey

Had to read it twice!! This one got me so hard I thought my dick would explode!

Not my first time........

been reading alot of your stories and i enjoy THEM VERY MUCH sorry i didn't leave a comment on the others *blows you kiss* you are a hell of a writer........

much luv

yourfuturebabymomma jk lol

So hot

I need a cock so bad right now I can't stand it. VERY hot story. THANKS!

HOT

Left me wanting more. Very well written and easy reading.

wow

Damn that was hot just the tought of them in the bathtub dets me off

OH BROTHER!

A twin sister who becomes your fuck toy!
Does it get any better than that?
Oh, and fucking on Mom and dad's bed!
I AM SO HORNY RIGHT NOW!

Feakin Great

100 is too little of a rate. I tried to pleasure myself, but it was too short. Please continue this. I see you haven't writen anything for a while. Please write more.

Wishing for more

I liked the story, and was hoping for more of a beginning and maybe some after story, does she get pregnant? Many of your stories begin and end too quickly, keep trying.

my sis

i also humped my elder sister when she was taking a shower and i accidently went it.

Best stories online

I think most of your stories are just about Perfect. ignore the fools who want more buildup.I think your imaginary family is more real thanthe one I married into. My wife and her brother are both past 50 and have never seen each other naked. How anal can you get?

my sis

I really enjoyed the story. It would be so fun to do something like that with my sis, although we are both too old for that.

Excellent

I haven't gotten through all your stories yet, but all the ones I have read, this one included, are absolutely perfect. Just the right amount of tension, build-up, and anticipation; just the right balance of being so right, and so wonderfully wrong.

Gr8 story

Very well written and sexy story. I loved it.

sweet

It was awesome. I masturbated b/c of this, and not to mention I actually fucked my sister. It was great.

oh boy

got me off...a little short....read your other stories, keep writing

Wish I had a Sister

It was very hot, If i was at home and not somewhere more public when reading it I would have jacked off.

Very sexy...

Loved your story and I enjoyed every little bit of it. I must say that you painted some awesome images with your story. Well done and thanks.

nice!

definatly a good read, i came so hard whilst reading this

I wish I had a brother.

Mmm, stories like these always get me so horny. If I had a brother I'd want to do this all the time.

madd sexy

dat was awsome,first time reader n I gotta admitt it made me cum pretty good

My twin sister and I enjoyed such experiences from 14 thru college, even today once and a while, were 54.

nice

i came three times reading this

whoa.

i was rubbing my clit the whole time, and its still throbbing.

ur writing sucks

not to be harsh but this story didnt excite me in the least and im a big incest fan. next time u write do a better fucking story than this jesus.

nice

i like most of your stories, this is a really good one !!

some people are such 'tards.

for example, the person two below me who insists on making an anti-incest remark on a story that's IN the INCEST/TABOO category. speaking of things "sucking" and not in the good way... yeah.
plus, i actually enjoy your writing and read your stories a lot, so i don't know wtf that part was about.

for my two cents... excellent story, keep up the good work, i daresay you're among the best on here.
5/5, 100/100 :)

Awesome

Wow very nice. I liked your story a lot.

Hot story! Almost like coming home again!

I loved this story. I reminds me a time when i was teen and shared similar times with my step sister. I was 16 and she was 19. Nobody knew about our "relationship". Our parents (just recently married) had a small house with only one bathroom. Here was our little "game": Often, when she was in the bathtub, i would fake like i had to pee and could not hold it another second. Once i got into the bathroom and locked the door, she would aready have her ass wet and soaped up. She would turn around, bend over and i would fuck her ass till i shot a wad up her asshole. Then i'd piss, rinse off and leave. Whole thing took just a few minutes. Very hot time.!

Where is the plot?

This would have been much more pleasureable if we knew more about brother and sister. You start out building character and then quickly descend into dick/pussy/ass/cum/fuck world. A litte more depth would make the story really worthwhile. You know you can do better

GREAT!

Please write a second story to this! I LOVE IT

great

i loved it write other chapter

wow

keep up the good work...