Bathtime

awesome

great work keep it up

Amazing!

This is one of the best incest stories I have ever read! Keep up the good work!

wonderful

I was masturbating the whole time. Wonderful story.

doing myself right now

oh my god very hot

More Detail

Be more descriptive. Otherwise not bad.

Positive

Very good story other than it moved too fast and loses potential for a strong erotic response by reader.

Good potential

This is my biggest fantasy, and your story started out well. I had worked myself up to a good hard-on when the story stopped. I'd love to see more.

Good Stuff with Hope

Aside from the basic "good work", I do have this to say... This story could have the possibility to develop into something more than a one to two page article on the lusts of incest... A little bit more description would go a long way to feed the story and keep the reader engaged... Obviously, you would,t want to go into such detail as the spackle on the walls and the clever color motif picked out by the characters' parents on a run-through at the local home-depot, but a good charge of description will keep things in more perspective. Liked the story, it has potential.

i want to fuck my sister too

Im a big fan of incest erotica and desperately want to fuck my sister. I am 15 and fantasise about my 16 year old sister all the time. This story gave me a massive erection and i was tempted to cum whilst reading it, however, i felt it lacked in detail. I much prefer teasing each other and wondering what might happen before the action begins. It leads to a better climax when you get to the end of the story. Maybe his sister walking in on him wanking in the bath and getting horny would be better. Good story

holy shit

i have wanted to participate in incest with my cousin since i read my first incest story. but the way you told your story... wow!

So detailed

this was a good story. I actually fucked my cousin before. she has a 34 C-cup she was all screaming and moaning but in the end it was the same as your story.

loved it!

Oh god i've wanted to fuck my brother for sooo long. makes me horny everytime just reading this wishing i was doing him!

woah

I was jerking off to this as I thought of my sister, then she ran right past my room as I came, holySHIT! that was a thrill!

Ver naice ;-)

Loved it ;P I've wanted to fuck my 18y.o cousin for years (I'm 15)... she's so hot and always walks around in pajamas (literally anywhere)... I swear she's teasing me....

mmm

I'm all wet now.

Holy Shit

This story made me CUM everywhere!!!!!

Holy SHIT!!!

I almost blew my load just reading this thing; please, more to this story!!!!

OH MY FREAKING GAWD!!!

You have got to continue this story its incredable! More please.

FUCK YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I got so horny reading this, as soon as I touched my cock I blew my load! U gotta continue this story!! PLEASE!!!!!!

YES!

This made me blow my load feet through the air! thank you

woah!

this was so great you should really keep this story going please
i couldnt stop reading, i read this twice and when i came it was GREAT
i mean im a female and i really enjoyed this very much! thanks for
such a great story.

COULD BE!!!

This could do with some work I did still blow my load if you want help hit me up on gingerboii01302@hotmail.com this could be my fav if it was improved

Savvy. Aye, I be savvy.

Like your writing style.

Lots get overanxious and don't describe enough. Many who describe enough just aren't kinky enough. You seem to have found a happy medium.

That last question hanging in the air in the piece? THAT there is a major, major kink to a lot of us perverted, sick fucks out here. > )

More pls

Great story, seemed very realistic

Wow!!!

You know what I recently found out was you can take this pill or medicine crap and it kills off the sperm inside the girls body :) just saying
Oh nd amazing story I loved it

grate story

This is a really awesome story. Well written, with great description. Thanks for uploading it.

Great

Great story keep making ones like this

OH EM GEE

I just came

wow! ! !

that was a great story. it was really well written and was great on details. i am so wet right now! good job.


----jessica

Your stories

Are pretty hot! I'm just gonna keep going down the list of stories you've written. I'm hot and bothered and I plan on thinking of them when I masturbate later. Thanks!

wow five stars best cum ive ever had - william

Been a long time

It's been a long time since I've read Literotica frequently, but I still occasionally come back to reread this story. That's what happened tonight. I've never commented or given feedback before, despite your request, so I figured I would. Here's your feedback!

Wet...

As per usual I have stumbled across a gold mine on this site. Thansk for the great cum.

awsome

I'm going to summerize all my feelings into two wards. I CAME

love it

i love all of your stories...that i want everything you wrote done to me so badly...

Gosh! That is so hot! I am so wet right now. I am going to wake my husband for a real good time! Thanks for the great read!

fucking hot

This issssssssssss soooooooooooo coooooooooooool! I love it. Just one thing is there a part2?

You said to not be embarrassed, so here goes my attempt: -blushes- I definitely was aroused by this and I admit I wish I had a super hot twin at the moment (I'm an only child). This story is so amazing and wonderfully written. The detail was fantastic and realistic. The fact that they made love on their parents' bed made it even hotter. I guess I love the whole incest/taboo thing. I think because I was so sheltered growing up that I still feel uneasy at times, but I have so much running around in my imagination and I love reading fiction on it. To me, it's amazing that other people have the same thoughts or ideas that I do. I am not alone in thinking it is incredibly sexy. :) Being a bit naughty definitely gets me excited. You are amazing and I am adding you to be my faves. ^_^

Sex with my Sister

I never fucked her in the ass but after we lost our virginity to each other we must have screwed a couple of hundred times. We couldn't get enough of each other at first and since our Mom worked late we had plenty of opportunities. I remember distinctly the first time we did it. I was sitting between her legs while we masturbated each other and as I leaned forward to suck on her petite breasts my hard dick got pressed up against her hot and very wet pussy so I started humping up and down while sucking each nipple. This was the furthest we had gone so far and it felt incredible. Well one time when I pulled back the head slipped down and when I pushed forward I was half inside. Both of our eyes bugged out and I just stopped moving.

We had crossed the final barrier, one we both agreed not to do. So I said I'll just go this far not all the way. Yeah right! After about 10 strokes I was buried up to my balls and her legs were around my back.

I should probably right a series of stories since I think people would like to read about us. How we started, how it progressed and how it continues pretty much to this day now thirty years later.

We're both married with 2 children each but we both agree the sex we have with each other is the best. It's just incredible. If you have a brother or sister and you're both willing what are you waiting for?

Get in there and start fucking!!

Great story!

Great story!

sex with my sister

I used to leave incest magazines in my room and I knew my sister had read them so I knew she wanted to fuck as badly as I did and when we started it was as good as we both had dreamed it'd be.

Her pussy tastes so sweet

Absolutely hot!

My girlfriend and I find your stories a great way to start off our evening of fun. Please keep the stories coming.

so-so

half a story at best no begining rushed sex and no end so basicly half a story

DBRS

i love good incest stories!!

and this is one of them!! only complaint is wwwwaaayyyyyyy too short! i love the anticipation! thanks, hope there is more!

o m g

i came 5 times raing your stories more plez

Excellent stroke story

Good grammar, spelling, pacing, "realness".

NICE

CONTINUE THE STORY

nice

great story!

Epic

I love anal sex stories and combined with the incestual nature this was fucking incredible. Well done