All Comments on 'Bathtime'

I loved your story, it was realistic. I enjoyed every bit of it, i hope you write more.

very sexy

I liked your story very much. It was well thought out and I do hope that you will take the time to write some other stories.

i fingered my clit all through it, thanx for getting me sooo damn wet and my clits still hard!

Thanks for the story. Made my girlfriend and I play with ourselves until we both shot our loads. Then we fucked and had 2 more orgasms.

Thanks. Keep on writing.

Julie and Mike

Thanks for this story..I had to play with myself as I was reading it...and imagined your cock hard as you wrote it..it got me so hot that I couldn't stop cummming..

This story got me hot and got me off. Awesome job!

-Nikki

that was one hot fucking story, write more, and give that hot fucking slut some more cock! I know brother will love it.

After reading this I went over to my girls house....she never knew what hit her.

-jim

Your stories are so engrossing that I keep feeling let down when I go to read the next chapter. Whatever you do to make the stories so great and so hot, keep it up!

Dude, you've got the nack for writing erotic stories. SOOOOO hot and horny, I came twice! Keep up the good work and I'll be looking for more of your stories! -SpazticStud

that was absolutely amazing....incredibly hot and erotic, that should be on hbo or something omg i loved it!!!!!!!

very nicely done! i have read some of you other works, They are really good. Keep it up :)

u have a gift for writing stories this one made me really horny i cant wait for my bf to come home

Short and to the point--and hot as hell. Great stroke story, and I'm still hard after cumming!

Still Rock hard, Glad the girls enjoyed it too, That gives me something else to ponder.

Look forward to more.

rocco

That was the fastest I've ever gotten off reading a story. The strongest I've ever gotten reading a story too, come to think of it. Thanks to you, I had to clean off the computer screen. Anyway, awesome story. Keep up the excellent work.

That story was awsome. I love you work I have read others, but this was the best so far. My girlfriend and I had the best sex ever after reading this story. PLEASE keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank You

Had to read it twice!! This one got me so hard I thought my dick would explode!

been reading alot of your stories and i enjoy THEM VERY MUCH sorry i didn't leave a comment on the others *blows you kiss* you are a hell of a writer........

much luv

yourfuturebabymomma jk lol

I need a cock so bad right now I can't stand it. VERY hot story. THANKS!

Left me wanting more. Very well written and easy reading.

Damn that was hot just the tought of them in the bathtub dets me off

A twin sister who becomes your fuck toy!

Does it get any better than that?

Oh, and fucking on Mom and dad's bed!

I AM SO HORNY RIGHT NOW!

100 is too little of a rate. I tried to pleasure myself, but it was too short. Please continue this. I see you haven't writen anything for a while. Please write more.

I liked the story, and was hoping for more of a beginning and maybe some after story, does she get pregnant? Many of your stories begin and end too quickly, keep trying.

i also humped my elder sister when she was taking a shower and i accidently went it.

I think most of your stories are just about Perfect. ignore the fools who want more buildup.I think your imaginary family is more real thanthe one I married into. My wife and her brother are both past 50 and have never seen each other naked. How anal can you get?

I really enjoyed the story. It would be so fun to do something like that with my sis, although we are both too old for that.

I haven't gotten through all your stories yet, but all the ones I have read, this one included, are absolutely perfect. Just the right amount of tension, build-up, and anticipation; just the right balance of being so right, and so wonderfully wrong.

Very well written and sexy story. I loved it.

It was awesome. I masturbated b/c of this, and not to mention I actually fucked my sister. It was great.

got me off...a little short....read your other stories, keep writing

It was very hot, If i was at home and not somewhere more public when reading it I would have jacked off.

Loved your story and I enjoyed every little bit of it. I must say that you painted some awesome images with your story. Well done and thanks.

definatly a good read, i came so hard whilst reading this

Mmm, stories like these always get me so horny. If I had a brother I'd want to do this all the time.

dat was awsome,first time reader n I gotta admitt it made me cum pretty good

My twin sister and I enjoyed such experiences from 14 thru college, even today once and a while, were 54.

i came three times reading this

i was rubbing my clit the whole time, and its still throbbing.

not to be harsh but this story didnt excite me in the least and im a big incest fan. next time u write do a better fucking story than this jesus.

i like most of your stories, this is a really good one !!

for example, the person two below me who insists on making an anti-incest remark on a story that's IN the INCEST/TABOO category. speaking of things "sucking" and not in the good way... yeah.<BR>

plus, i actually enjoy your writing and read your stories a lot, so i don't know wtf that part was about.<BR><BR>

for my two cents... excellent story, keep up the good work, i daresay you're among the best on here.<BR>

5/5, 100/100 :)

Wow very nice. I liked your story a lot.

I loved this story. I reminds me a time when i was teen and shared similar times with my step sister. I was 16 and she was 19. Nobody knew about our "relationship". Our parents (just recently married) had a small house with only one bathroom. Here was our little "game": Often, when she was in the bathtub, i would fake like i had to pee and could not hold it another second. Once i got into the bathroom and locked the door, she would aready have her ass wet and soaped up. She would turn around, bend over and i would fuck her ass till i shot a wad up her asshole. Then i'd piss, rinse off and leave. Whole thing took just a few minutes. Very hot time.!

This would have been much more pleasureable if we knew more about brother and sister. You start out building character and then quickly descend into dick/pussy/ass/cum/fuck world. A litte more depth would make the story really worthwhile. You know you can do better

Please write a second story to this! I LOVE IT

i loved it write other chapter

keep up the good work...

great work keep it up

This is one of the best incest stories I have ever read! Keep up the good work!

I was masturbating the whole time. Wonderful story.

oh my god very hot

Be more descriptive. Otherwise not bad.

Very good story other than it moved too fast and loses potential for a strong erotic response by reader.

This is my biggest fantasy, and your story started out well. I had worked myself up to a good hard-on when the story stopped. I'd love to see more.

Aside from the basic "good work", I do have this to say... This story could have the possibility to develop into something more than a one to two page article on the lusts of incest... A little bit more description would go a long way to feed the story and keep the reader engaged... Obviously, you would,t want to go into such detail as the spackle on the walls and the clever color motif picked out by the characters' parents on a run-through at the local home-depot, but a good charge of description will keep things in more perspective. Liked the story, it has potential.

Im a big fan of incest erotica and desperately want to fuck my sister. I am 15 and fantasise about my 16 year old sister all the time. This story gave me a massive erection and i was tempted to cum whilst reading it, however, i felt it lacked in detail. I much prefer teasing each other and wondering what might happen before the action begins. It leads to a better climax when you get to the end of the story. Maybe his sister walking in on him wanking in the bath and getting horny would be better. Good story

i have wanted to participate in incest with my cousin since i read my first incest story. but the way you told your story... wow!

this was a good story. I actually fucked my cousin before. she has a 34 C-cup she was all screaming and moaning but in the end it was the same as your story.

Oh god i've wanted to fuck my brother for sooo long. makes me horny everytime just reading this wishing i was doing him!

I was jerking off to this as I thought of my sister, then she ran right past my room as I came, holySHIT! that was a thrill!

Loved it ;P I've wanted to fuck my 18y.o cousin for years (I'm 15)... she's so hot and always walks around in pajamas (literally anywhere)... I swear she's teasing me....

I'm all wet now.

This story made me CUM everywhere!!!!!

I almost blew my load just reading this thing; please, more to this story!!!!

You have got to continue this story its incredable! More please.

I got so horny reading this, as soon as I touched my cock I blew my load! U gotta continue this story!! PLEASE!!!!!!

This made me blow my load feet through the air! thank you

this was so great you should really keep this story going please

i couldnt stop reading, i read this twice and when i came it was GREAT

i mean im a female and i really enjoyed this very much! thanks for

such a great story.

This could do with some work I did still blow my load if you want help hit me up on gingerboii01302@hotmail.com this could be my fav if it was improved

Like your writing style.

Lots get overanxious and don't describe enough. Many who describe enough just aren't kinky enough. You seem to have found a happy medium.

That last question hanging in the air in the piece? THAT there is a major, major kink to a lot of us perverted, sick fucks out here. > )

More pls

Great story, seemed very realistic

You know what I recently found out was you can take this pill or medicine crap and it kills off the sperm inside the girls body :) just saying

Oh nd amazing story I loved it

grate story

This is a really awesome story. Well written, with great description. Thanks for uploading it.

Great story keep making ones like this

I just came

that was a great story. it was really well written and was great on details. i am so wet right now! good job.

----jessica <3

Are pretty hot! I'm just gonna keep going down the list of stories you've written. I'm hot and bothered and I plan on thinking of them when I masturbate later. Thanks!

wow five stars best cum ive ever had - william

It's been a long time since I've read Literotica frequently, but I still occasionally come back to reread this story. That's what happened tonight. I've never commented or given feedback before, despite your request, so I figured I would. Here's your feedback!

As per usual I have stumbled across a gold mine on this site. Thansk for the great cum.

I'm going to summerize all my feelings into two wards. I CAME

i love all of your stories...that i want everything you wrote done to me so badly...

Gosh! That is so hot! I am so wet right now. I am going to wake my husband for a real good time! Thanks for the great read!

This issssssssssss soooooooooooo coooooooooooool! I love it. Just one thing is there a part2?

You said to not be embarrassed, so here goes my attempt: -blushes- I definitely was aroused by this and I admit I wish I had a super hot twin at the moment (I'm an only child). This story is so amazing and wonderfully written. The detail was fantastic and realistic. The fact that they made love on their parents' bed made it even hotter. I guess I love the whole incest/taboo thing. I think because I was so sheltered growing up that I still feel uneasy at times, but I have so much running around in my imagination and I love reading fiction on it. To me, it's amazing that other people have the same thoughts or ideas that I do. I am not alone in thinking it is incredibly sexy. :) Being a bit naughty definitely gets me excited. You are amazing and I am adding you to be my faves. ^_^

I never fucked her in the ass but after we lost our virginity to each other we must have screwed a couple of hundred times. We couldn't get enough of each other at first and since our Mom worked late we had plenty of opportunities. I remember distinctly the first time we did it. I was sitting between her legs while we masturbated each other and as I leaned forward to suck on her petite breasts my hard dick got pressed up against her hot and very wet pussy so I started humping up and down while sucking each nipple. This was the furthest we had gone so far and it felt incredible. Well one time when I pulled back the head slipped down and when I pushed forward I was half inside. Both of our eyes bugged out and I just stopped moving.

We had crossed the final barrier, one we both agreed not to do. So I said I'll just go this far not all the way. Yeah right! After about 10 strokes I was buried up to my balls and her legs were around my back.

I should probably right a series of stories since I think people would like to read about us. How we started, how it progressed and how it continues pretty much to this day now thirty years later.

We're both married with 2 children each but we both agree the sex we have with each other is the best. It's just incredible. If you have a brother or sister and you're both willing what are you waiting for?

Get in there and start fucking!!

Great story!

I used to leave incest magazines in my room and I knew my sister had read them so I knew she wanted to fuck as badly as I did and when we started it was as good as we both had dreamed it'd be.

Her pussy tastes so sweet

My girlfriend and I find your stories a great way to start off our evening of fun. Please keep the stories coming.

half a story at best no begining rushed sex and no end so basicly half a story

DBRS

and this is one of them!! only complaint is wwwwaaayyyyyyy too short! i love the anticipation! thanks, hope there is more!

i came 5 times raing your stories more plez

Good grammar, spelling, pacing, "realness".

CONTINUE THE STORY

great story!

I love anal sex stories and combined with the incestual nature this was fucking incredible. Well done