Vickie

I liked this one...

Many of yours I don't, this one I did!

The best I've read by JPB

Great plot twist. Sometimes a little obvious but fun all the same. Nice to read a story about a man with principles and values.

cont.

and is not self-righteous.

Reality show

This story feels real to me. There are no devious plots or clever revenges. Vickie is a piece of work and a bit of an air head in that she can't accept that what she was doing was cheating but in the end she wasn't Frank's problem so who cares. I think Tony is living with a time bomb because Vickie is very self centered. How the hell could she agree to marry Frank? It annoyed me that his friends didn't tell Frank that Vickie was married but that seemed like real life as well. Once Frank sent Tony off to reconnect with Vickie I felt that Frank was spending way too much time on self pity, especially with Odette with him. Maybe if he had been alone it would have been understandable. But having a red hot babe who wants your ass and you sit around moping????? Come on! That's not believable! It's not like he needed to propose to Odette immediately, just have fun with her. And he can't?? Beyond that the story held together very well.

No way!

This was one of JPB's better stories. But, I fail to see why her husband would continue to be married to a round heeled slut like her. She'll cheat again.

Yea

Good one Bob. For the hero, for the other guy not so much...

Yet another piece of light entertainment

Poor Tony certainly will not pass the LW revenge and will be consigned to the fifth level of Hell, but the protagonist came away smelling like roses. Vickie was a congenital liar and can never be trusted.... Thanks, Bob for a good story.

Not a wimp ..sort of likeable... but kind of stupid

well he isnt a wimp but come on do men --or women for that matter -- REALLY get engaged or married without ever seeing the inside of where the other lives?

or met theio parents?

of family?

Bruce, I disagree.

It will be the seventh level and Dante' will be laughing like a son of a bitch.
Welcome back Bob and thanks for the good read.

Frank was lucky

If Vickie thinks it is OK to conceal her marriage, develop a relationship with another guy, even accept an engagement ring from that other guy, and agree to his proposal for marriage, than Tony better start working for Fiat instead of driving a truck (fix it again, Tony). Frank was lucky she did not end up a polyandrist, or whatever the female equivalent of a bigamist might be called.

Seriously, Vickie can never be trusted. She'll fuck some other trucker at a rest stop, because Tony "can never be enough for her." Of course, a lot of guys dream of being with a woman with nymphomania, but the reality is that such women are few and far between.

What most men really want is to be with women with equal sex drives to their own -- most times, women have significantly lower sex drive, and men are frustrated by this, but they don't realize how difficult it might be, were the women to always be demanding sex while the men were not really in the mood. The writing was good but I agree with others, Vickie cannot be trusted, and Tony will find that out soon enough. Thanks for writing.

Nice Read

Good story, well written.

Bob!!!!!!!

You are just a writing machine!!!!!! Great read "Thank You"

Harry FYI some do.

Before I got married I was only in her house twice and both times both her parents and her 3 siblings were gone. Her mother hated me until the day she died. I always thought her death would be the happiest day of my life. I put up with 34 years of her crap, what I didn't count on was how it would affect my wife and our 4 boys. I still wish to this day that the Wicked Witch of the West was still alive. So sad but so true...........

JPL are you getting Romantic these days?

Brilliant read and this could be the first story you tied up every loose end VERY NICELY DONE

JPB, interesting and different from your latest works

I liked the different POV (ie the "other" guy). Also a bit more romantic as previously stated and different from some of your recent writings. It was equally refreshing not to see the run of the mill cukold or whimp angle. I liked the feeling of closure with no one too badly scarred by at the end; I look forward for more of the same. Thank You, Sir.

LeFrog

Thanks Bob

Enjoyed this one!

Amazing!

Original! Outstanding.

I gave it a 5 star

but I think Tony is a cuckold tried and tested. You find out your has a boyfirend and you want to give her the choice of whom to pick. Fuck that slut and move on.

CHOOSE RIGHT

take long choose wrong. TK U MLJ LV NV

JPB

has very varying standards. This is the best.

Fair

A story about a cuck who took his wife back and a wannabe cuck who wanted the other cuck's wife. What the fuck???
What happened to Charlie?

HA Ha ha

I find JPB's stories a bit hit & miss

this one hits. Good work.

Chuckle - Barnyard

Gaggle of Clucks in the henhouse.
Entertaining.

Thx!

I hate her but I'd date her!

It's better then being with a bore. Ouch! Good story.

Just Plain Cuck, grow a pair and have some self respect!

"She cheated on me"
"So what?"

That's as far as I got.

"So what?" Are you FUCKING out of your mind?

There is no face and no pussy good enough to put up with that!
There are only two possible (depending upon the circumstances) reasons that could get her off the hook: she was drugged or raped. This isn't either of those.
Nor was it even a one time thing.

And look at her reaction to being "cheated on" by "Timmy": dumped his ass!
Learn anything Bob?

Have some self respect! You are not such a loser piece of shit (I assume) that you have to settle for a woman that can't be faithful to you!

Gave it a deserved 4*...

...You are a very gifted author with a broad port folio as it seems. I cannot stand your cuckold worshipping in most stories, but you always surprize when you go in to other themes. I do not agree that this one let the main character appear a wimp; he definately was not. Above that you have managed to develope characters within 3 pages. Very nice job, there..and almost a "five". Thank you for the read.

Gave it a deserved 4*...

...You are a very gifted author with a broad port folio as it seems. I cannot stand your cuckold worshipping in most stories, but you always surprize when you go in to other themes. I do not agree that this one let the main character appear a wimp; he definately was not. Above that you have managed to develope characters within 3 pages. Very nice job, there..and almost a "five". Thank you for the read.

Only gave this a 3 because Odette deserved better. He clearly would have chosen Vicki over her, just as Vicki chose Tony over him. Still well crafted.

OK...

I read this a couple of years ago, but never commented. Now I am. This story is just another proof that JPB is the true standard bearer in the LW category.

Jedd Clampett

Oh my god.......

Hell has froze over.....!!! No one watched their wife getting fucked.......noone ate a cream pie.....noone got sloppy seconds.....noone had interracial sex. Awesome job I think this is the first story that has got over a 3 vote from me from this author. Thanx for the time and effort gave it a five.

Thoughts

“I'm with you when you are home and I'm with Frank when you aren't." – Yeah, that might work for you, and even for Tony, since he’s out of town. Hell, maybe he even has some out-of-town honeys! But what about Frank? What is he supposed to do while you’re with Tony? Jerk off?

Minor point - maybe it was assumed, but nowhere was Vickie giving him the ring back mentioned.

Nice one

JPB is truly an enigma wrapped in a riddle.
You never really know which way he will take a storyline. Some of his works infuriate me , and I'll swear off reading anymore. But somehow I always come back because of stories like this.
Great job JPB
4*'s

1*

Usual absurd jpb.

5*****

Usual great job.

IF YOU CANT GET WHAT YOU WANT

take the one that is closest. TK U MLJ LV NV

Ring

Vickey owes you a half caret engagement ring.E8D