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En-Gauge-ing Love Ch. 02

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by Anonymous10/30/10

Small error

You said that your team was up by two points. If they are playing softball you should know that it would be runs.

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I would just like to say to the person who commented before that to pick out a small grievance like that is just stupid. Maybe where you come from points and runs mean different things, but around here where i live the terms are interchangeable in softball and/or baseball. If you are going to criticize my writing please at least make it worth my while to read. Thanks.

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by Anonymous10/31/10

Runs, Points, Don't think it really matters. It doesn't take anything away from the story and I am pretty sure everyone who has read the story knows what was implied.

As for the writing I loved it. Hope this isn't the end and that there are more chapters of Guage and Erin to come.

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by Anonymous01/05/15

Another hit baby!!!!!

OH please keep writing these super hot NASTY fuck stories!!!!!!!! My cock loves your prose and my hand wishes it was a warm wet pussy! You qualify as a true erotic sex author and I love your work. (So does my dick)!!!!!!

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