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Sad ending
The ending makes me cry, but nice adding a agent who will be able to verify Susan's story. Also, knowing that the FBI has been aware of Shawn's presence for a couple of years makes him scarier.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Everything certainly look grim for the two lovers
An extremely captivating and exciting story. The theme is one that lends itself to be full of sorrow and yet shows love between the two main characters.
Well done !
The author has accomplished keeping the story very believable and exciting at the same time.
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks
Hooked!
This story has me hooked. I love the way you built up to Shawn and Susan's relationship and the fact that you didn't make her a 'wimp', but a fighter even when she's scared out of her wits. Keep up the good work. I hope there's a happy ending for them and their baby.
Certainly not the usual.....
...type of fare here however, that is our gain.
This is good!
It is well thought out, erotic and believable (if anything on this is).
The characters are....I find myself caring about them.
Good work. Keep it up.
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