- All
Comments (9) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
Pathetic.
Haven't you people ever heard of spermbanks?
What's with -
all - the dashes in - this story?
Dreck, pure and simple.
Useless.
What a bunch of truly sick MFer's! You lick up your own brothers cum and clean him off?!
If this were true, the whole family would be prime candidates for retroactive abortion.
What is pregant?
I always thought it was pregnant. I have 2 babies and I always thought I was pregnant, maybe I was pregant?
Spell-check on the submissions page?
I guess not. I apologize. I'm working on getting that changed.
I'll also look at the over-use of dashes.
Thank you for the comments, everyone. I appreciate you taking the time to let me know how I'm doing. Every critique will serve to make my stories better - so thank you.
Well you asked
on how to improve . Here it goes .
First , this is LW category , the readers here dont like swap/swing stories or wimp/cuck stories so if your going to write those with that kind of element please place them in the correct category of group sex , erotic couplings or fetish . You will get raked over the coals here . Read what LW is all about with authors like Average-Writer , Harddaysknight ,DG Hear , ohio , slirpuff . That will tell you what LW is . The gay incest thing was beyond disturbing . If you feel you MUST write a sequel , please have the husband kick her ass to the curb and get some professional help with the incest thing he seems to have going . If the wife and brother keep fucking after the fact when she knows she cant have kids anyway , they need revenge coming down on them and he needs to get out . etc. etc .
Sister in law.
Similar to me,my brother could not get his wife pregnant.Medically his sperm count was way too low.So,Kev and Kate asked me if i would try to get Kate pregnant.I thought for awhile,agreed,Kev said he would watch,o.k.Came the time,Kate went into the bedroom,knelt on the bed,her nice round arse and thighs on show as i got behind her and pushed into her pussy.She was wet,her pussy felt great as i stroked in and out of her until finally i shot my seed deep into her.I pulled back,Kev whos cock was hard took my place and rammed his cock in and out of his wife,adding his cumm to mine.I was told i had to do this 3 times in the week,i didnt object,i liked fucking Kate.Each time Kev mounted her as well.They had a baby girl, but Kev told me that they wanted 3 kids so i did the honours,2 girls,1 boy.
Good story...
Glad to see you got it moved; know you've been trying! Can't wait for your next story :)
Nice Lay
Read your topic,& we're happy to announce that I got my niece & our daughter pregnant for their first baby & the wife put them up to it, since the wife can't produce the eggs no more. So it's up to me & the kids to do the fun for her... KEEP writing PLEASE
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Getting Gina Pregnant or
More submissions by Monagamous_Now.