I enjoyed it. It was a cute well written story. You played the older guy off as so innocent until the very end. Again,well done.
This story is a turn on. I keep reading it from time to time. And I love the ending. Keep writing.
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I enjoyed it. It was a cute well written story. You played the older guy off as so innocent until the very end. Again,well done.
Hot !!!
This story is a turn on.
I keep reading it from time to time.
And I love the ending.
Keep writing.
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