Counter Blackmail

A great little story

It was just too short. It left me wanting to read of them fucking each other a lot more.

Thanks for the read

A good beginning

But who is Allan?

Good

You wrote a nice little story. I wished it would've been longer and maybe included there nite together. That does however leave room for chapter 2, will that be forth coming?

A little cruder than previous submissions, but very good.

I agree with Big day rich, too short.
But again a good read.

Forgot to say

I tried saying Evan Evans three times, it's very hard.

Name switches..

Drive me nuts! Good story, but try to remember the characters name. In one paragraph, he was Allan, then Gerald, then back to Allan in the next breath. Very distracting to an otherwise decent story.

not bad

always good stories, it was quick and to the point maybe more coming

Well done!

I agree with some of the other posters, it could have been a bit more drawn out or longer. Still a great read and I gave it 5 star vote. Thanks for writing and posting.

Needs more

This could be a good story. It falls short in detail and uniqueness. 5624

great one

again moondrift, one of my fav autors, i love such mom son blackmailing stories..

what a shame, it was to short, maybe we'll get more parts of the story ?

5/5

more please

Great story but needs more chapters as it all seemed a bit rushed at end

I hate it

when an otherwise good - though a little short - story is spoilt by the author forgetting the name of his protagonist (is it Gerald or Allan?).
I get the feeling that the writer doesn't really care for either story or reader.
This one is not up to your usual standards.

Gerald or Allan?

OK, the story was decent but keep the name straight please.

WHILE EYE DEW KNOT NO WHETHER HER SUN HAD A SPLIT PERSONALTY. AND USED THE NAME; GERALD ore ALLEN, DEPENDING UPON HIS MOOD.ORE PERHAPS , MOM WAS TREATED TWO A THREE-SOME BETWEEN ALLEN & GERALD..HOWEVER IT WOOD BEE A SHAME IF MOM & GERALD BOTH FOUR-GOT WHO GERALD REALLY WAS & HE BECAME ALLEN... O-WELL EYE GUESS EWE CAN RIGHT A STORY ABOUT ROLL-PLAY,... BUTT THE BOTTOM LINE IS,. I FOUND THE STORY ENTERTAINING.. AND A HOLE LOT BETTER THAN EYE COULD RIGHT .... LOL

Applause...

Two problems are solved in the best possible manner.

she was a fuck slut whore

to let the other guy fuck her but now she has her son to service her needs for ever - vice is nice but incest is best....long may they fuck together and even get her pregnant....

a nice little vignette

I had to laugh though at mom's thought, "it was not unusual for sons to have sexual feelings for their mothers." Duh. Doesn't she know the way boys talk among themselves? The common sayings boys share, like, "show it hard for mom," and "the best pussy you'll ever have is the one you came out of." I believe that down deep most or even all boys have the urge to stick their young cock up between their mommy's legs and blow their young balls up mommy's warm wet ever-loving cunt. Nothing can ever feel as great--as good and just so damn right--to a boy's cock as his own mother's cunt.

Who's "Allan?"

Think you missed a couple of name changes there.

Who the f*ck is Allan?

At first I thought I missed something!