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WOW!
Title of the comment says it all. WOW! BRAVO!
Wonderful
Well done, and so sweet. :)
Beautiful
I have been married for 40 years and couldn't have expressed love any better than you did. Thank you.
Wonderful
A beautiful story and well written. Their love shines through it. Thank you.
What a beautiful story!
With tears in these old eyes and a big, big lump in my throat, I can only say thank you for your story. It truly touched my heart.
That was so bittersweet
Thank you.
wonderful!!!!
What a beautiful way to describe a love story!!!!!!!
Am in tears now!!!
Please keep up the good work!!!!
I really liked this. It's a beautiful piece and I'm glad you talked about organ donation. (My best friend just got a new heart and lungs).
A couple points about an organ donor - if she was being prepped for harvesting, her hand would still be warm because they don't pull the life support until the vital organs are harvested. If she 'died instantly', it's unlikely she would be able to be a donor unless they got her heart beating in the field and she came into the ER brain dead. Minor detail but thought I'd note it.
Awesome
One of the best written romance stories I've ever read. It's either written from personal experience or about a dear friend's. Got my tears, my friend. Keep up the good, thoughtful, real-life work.
I have tears in my eyes...
Really, I do. You are, by far, one of the best writers at Literotica. Please, keep writing. Looking forward to more brilliance from you. :) Take care.
You should write a follow up since the way the story ends is so sad. What happens to Henry? Does he find another love?
One of the very best
I think so, anyway.
Touching
The story meant a lot to me. Thank you.
let us know in advance
please let us know in advance that the story is gonna end as tragic... I was all smiles a moment... And then had tears in another....
Soo beautiful story... With such a sad end.... Loved it :)
Fine job
Great story and you did a nice job of controlling our emotions, bringing them to the surface just at the very end.
Thank you for writing this. I hope to continue to read your stories.
5***** from me.
Regards,
-Pultoy
REMBERANCE OF THE PAST
even though it;s really late in time, TK U MLJ LV NV
WHOA!
The imagery and emotions of the story were so vivid i was in tears by the end
Beautiful. Very well though and written. Once again, beautiful.
As always
a beautiful story.
What A Beautiful Story.*****
Thanks for sharing.
Oh. My. Goodness.
This is an exceptional story.
Wow.
This moved me deeply. I knew when she went into the woods that she was gone, but the ending still pushed me off the emotional cliff.
Very well done.
Walking Her Home
Is a song by Mark Schultz in the same vein as this story. It brings a smile to my face and tears to my eyes each time I hear it.
Check it out.
Beautiful!!!!
Owwwwww
That really hurt. Great story though kudos!
except
wonderful story except for the last part.Brings back memories.
Beautiful
One of the loveliest stories I've read anywhere.
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