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Loving the story so far
I can't believe that you are going to make me wait for the outcome of this showdown.
I know that the wait will be worth it though.
Nice smooth delivery
unlike Old West Whiskey (rotgut); The story is completely foreseeable but still highly enjoyable..
KUDO's Author
Your talent shines through with the informality being infectious.
More should take a moment to return to the Old West and be thoroughly entertained.
With Very High Regard
yes yes
3 great characters together. i love it.
gaathering 02
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
when the writing is good
the story can stand on it's own.
cliff hangers are annoying and not needed.
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