Yeah... i could've taken twice as many details on the sex (of which there was slim to none), and about half as much detail on the race relations of the main character (of which there was WAY too much). It's erotica... not a sociology forum.
it almost felt like a letter..or an essay.there wasn't a story or even a point.you need to work on each character and let them atleast have a conversation.(Non erotic) would of been a better selection.
Enjoyed reading this. Well written. Like the human relations of the story and especially liked, "Attraction is attraction". It happens. Details? Enough for me. Was looking for a little substance with my erotica anyway.
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Anonymous11/07/11
Sweet
Awww. That was so sweet.
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Anonymous12/21/11
from what specific contry that asian man belongs to????
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Anonymous01/09/13
HAPPY FOR YOU!
If this story is true, which I hope that it is. I am very happy for you. I also love Asian men. I have been trying to be in a relationship with one for years now. I had one Chinese boyfriend, but he was a whore. I tried being in relationships with black women too, but like the black women in Canada, the black women in the States love thugs and hustlers who whip them and treat them like trash! Oh well, such is life.
English
Um ...
Details?
Yeah... i could've taken twice as many details on the sex (of which there was slim to none), and about half as much detail on the race relations of the main character (of which there was WAY too much). It's erotica... not a sociology forum.
ok
it almost felt like a letter..or an essay.there wasn't a story or even a point.you need to work on each character and let them atleast have a conversation.(Non erotic) would of been a better selection.
Loved it. Just wish it was a little longer!
Enjoyed reading this. Well written. Like the human relations of the story and especially liked, "Attraction is attraction". It happens. Details? Enough for me. Was looking for a little substance with my erotica anyway.
Sweet
Awww. That was so sweet.
from what specific contry that asian man belongs to????
HAPPY FOR YOU!
If this story is true, which I hope that it is. I am very happy for you. I also love Asian men. I have been trying to be in a relationship with one for years now. I had one Chinese boyfriend, but he was a whore. I tried being in relationships with black women too, but like the black women in Canada, the black women in the States love thugs and hustlers who whip them and treat them like trash! Oh well, such is life.
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