Don't Pull Out

Well done Cindy

Keep 'em coming.

That's REALLY HOT.....

Looking at it from the perspective of the KID! It would totally SUCK to be her cucked hubby. I think I might have a talk about restraint. She seems to HAVE NONE! If that's the case...out she'd go!

Next

Waiting for Chapter 2, the one that describes the new way of life they are/have entered into. She's tasted it, totally aroused and excited by it, had her forced sex and then had seconds before she went back home - well, Pandors' Box is now open.
There are possibly 1 to 3 more chapters to go and then, some similar category stories for you to write.
Enjoyed - Thanks!

Hot cuck action

If you write more, I'll look forward to reading it - ignore the haters but ask yourself this question, what are they more angry about, the subject or themselves for being aroused by it? Keep writing!

Good Story

Keep writing and ignore the haters!

What a piece of shit

Yuck

Only the demented/sicko's will get off on this crap!

Author - quit writing and jump off a very tall cliff. Not to mention, wrong category asshole - this is fodder for the mentally challenged. Lucky we only read the last paragraph which is written badly anyway.

Was awesome...

until the very end. He must be gay.

Yes very good wimp sissy cuck action.

Only those sick freaks that enjoy such a FETISH lifestyle will enjoy and jerk off to this type of story. Anyone else not into cuck stories shouldn't read this story.

really sick

which is the sickest, the wife who is a slut and willing to take diseases

or the idiot she is married to

Good story.

Good story. Don't listen to the fools that whine about the content.

I could never understand how readers take these stories of fantasy so seriously. If you don't like the fiction, then just move on to another story. Why do people feel they need to bash a writer for his story? This is not real life people...and if by some slight chance it was, then why bash a guy if this is what he enjoys? As for myself, I didn't care for the story as it isnt something I am into. However, the writer should keep writing and maybe I will enjoy a different fantasy he writes about.

Commentators and authors who dislike negative comments

The point of writing a story on this site is to become famous and establish a brand such as HDK. DQS HiV or even SamuelX. The only way to do that is to attract as many comments as you can. If you attract 10+ comments in a day you will make it to the 24 hour Hall of Fame. If you attract 30+ comments you will make it to the 7 Day Plaque and if you continue to attract comments, you will be in the 30 day box.

I, for one only read stories that made it into those boxes and then read more stories from the same authors regardless of the scores as long as the brief descrfiption is intriguing. So dont bash the negative commentators, these people are far better than the lazy slobs who read and never bother to comment. FZC

welcome

thanks it was so easy to add you to the DO NOT READ list....an old tired story slut/wimp....If you wan't to write try to put new twists to worne out subjects we need a 0 to the rate score

YES YES PULL OUT, of the writing game that is.

Quit, don't write any more. Find another hobby.

Right track...

You are on the right track...just give us more, not so much extreme detail but sensuality and emotion in the words. I know you've got it in you. Think about pleasing the ladies in your story and then about the erotic for us guys.

Keep up the good good work...as long as you 'keep it up' during your writing its all worth it! :)

S

Invite Howie between those legs

Your second story is great too, but this one is the hottest and deserves more chapters.

Perfect ending

Such a strong effort. I love this story. This girl is great and he's a trooper for sucking her out. I love these kind of stories. My wife won't fuck around even though we spoke about it. It's a shame. But this story was great.

three words: morning-after pill

three words: morning-after pill

learn it, live it, love it.

Good story but.....

Good story but I would have liked to read more about hubby cleaning up after Cindy's lover.

I liked it. Keep them coming..:)

Unfair

Why should the husband have to wait for his cream? Instead of getting it from the wife, he should be allowed to get it straight from the source. It's obvious his wife doesn't satisfy him anyway, and the way the author writes this story, I'm positive hubby would be much happier with a few manly cocks rather than his wifes old nasty crotch. I'm pretty sure that's the take the author is sending with this fantasy, so I'll wait patiently for the author to give us another chapter when hubby leaves the wretched bitch in order to fill his fantasy (and have his ass filled.)

"1"

WTF

ANOTHER WIMP HUSBAND WHORE WIFE STORY. YOU WRITERS HYAVE NO IMAGINATION

don't mess with my poopchoot

Dr slapped his behind, said you're gonna be special, my sweet little poopchoot

AND NOW HES A HAPPY WIMPY CUCK

with delusions to look ahead for. TK U MLJ LV NV

Hot story

Hi,
Thanks for a very sexy story!
I am hard and horny, wishing this was my wife
And I were eating a hot creamypie from her steamy pussy
Thanks and please continue writing
Joe

Sorry, just good for readers...

...that read that hymne on being a wimp and use this story - along with their total loss of self-respect - to go and beat the meat. How about creating a section "Wimps corner", where they can dream their twisted dreams without "ordinary men" risking their mental health by accidentally stumbeling in?

To 'Sorry, just for readers...'

Quite funny comment, thanks. But it reads like the petulant bleat of a whipped cuck.

5*

I dunno.

All these folk who profess to hate your story but from the data available none have the guts to identify themselves.
Why don't they take their sticky fingers out of the trousers and back up their BS by doing better.
Having got that off my chest, frankly your story subject did little for me, but to paraphrase an long ago hero "I do not care for what you say but defend to the end your right to say it"

Little which is not 'formula'

Except them living near a 'parking lot', unless they are living in an apartment complex! Even then, since Hubby is expected to be at work for an extended time, why not take the Bull inside? Much more comfort AND privacy!

How do aspiring HotWives find dudes with 9" prongs so easily? Is there a secret handshake? Or is it the slow dance? That's why I keep a set of rolled-up socks handy! (Doesn't work, but ya gotta TRY!)

3*

Little which is not 'formula'

Don't know why first comment got posted OK on article page, but NOT on 'general comments' area!
Odd the couple would drive, in his car, to a distant part of (their apartment?) parking area? Take both cars over there, then she is 'not home yet'. Or, since Hubby is expected to be away for a good while, just go inside and make out on the couch, more comfortable and private...no security guards!
How do aspiring HotWives find the 9" prongs? Secret handshake? Or slow dancing?

What a fag

Why do these women all marry closet fags? These guys all want to eat another guys cum. Story was ok but husband is just a confused fag. He should have pushed his wife aside and taken the bull's cock up his ass and thanked his wife for bringing him home to him. Then he could further shock his wife by sucking his shit off the bull's dick, eating his ass and driving off forever with his new lover. Put all these stories in the gay column because that is where they belong.

Great story

Don't know anyone is complaining. If they don't want to read a "wife-watching" story, they should move on to something else. I loved the story! Hope you write more.

Obvious fake story

"Her eyes widened and she plunged her fingers into her pussy as she came".. bull shit..

also.. it's "CUMMED" not "came".

Cummed is to Cum as

Came is to Come... morons

Might be okay?

She's an admitted slut. She wants to expose him to every social disease known to man and expects him to be happy or excepting about it? What, do you live in Cloud Cuckoo Land? No man would accept her betrayal or her cheating ass back in the door. She's history.

Dosed up slut

complaints

I find it odd that when "Cindy" follows through with her husbands fantasy , she is the bad one. I became involved with a similiar such fantasy of my husbands , and when I followed through ,just to please him, He turned it against me., When we have sex he often brings it up that HE has never cheated on me but I have been an adulterer. He even sent emails to the man that used me from MY email account prior to our meeting to ensure that I would have sex with him. BUT I Am the bad one...

nice job

i liked your story

response to cindykay

As an adult, you made the choice to sleep with someone other than your husband. Yes it was with him wanting you to. But YOU still made the decision. If I was him, I would divorce you. You did commit adultery. He didn't, you knew when you did it. So do I think you deserve forgiveness-not for that. That's one sin I can't forgive. Sorry, but your ass would be out the door.

Damn

A cuck is born. Fantasy is one thing. To allow it to happen makes you a full blown wimp cuck sissy asshole. Die mother fucker.

if you get off eating creampie...

...wouldn´t it be a lot better picling up a guy? Or do you need the humiliation to get off? Certainly you gave up the fantasy of being a man..

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

5 stars!!!

ooohhhh OOAA is such a fucking fag

go back home and slurp your wife's leaving queer.

Loved it

I was there watching with you, I would love to have my wife do something similar. I don't think it is weird for our wives to enjoy sex and other guys should encourage their wives to have as much pleasure as they can. Life is meant to live and enjoy as much as you can, there is enough sadness in the world without forsaking pleasure. Well done and keep it up her.

my wife did the neighbor,then came home and did me too!

one night my wife came home and told me that she'd let the neighbor do her,and i didn't believe her until i felt her pus all wet,then i wanted to here where he'd done her?..Oh,she said,he did me in his daughters room!..So,did she have a nice soft bed?..No,there was just an old pink mattress laying down in the middle of the floor,that looked like it had been wetted on many times,and it was hot..(no a/c)..and the bed-room reeked of wet pee-pee,and it was real strong,like ammonia,and just being in there smelling the strong pee-pee wet odor turned me on like nothing has ever turned me on so much in my whole life,my wife said,and needless to say,i got a good pissy wet fuck,right after that,and now a little pee play is a regular part of our sex life,and we both love the wet pee odor in our bedroom,all thanks to the neighbor,and his bed-wetting daughter!

great fuck

my wife fucked my mate one night and I saw her.she sucked his cock till he came all over her tits and I could not believe what I was seeing.he then got hrd again and fucked her several times and she came about 6 times.they thought I was still sleeping so she came back to bed and I fucked her several times it was the best fuck ever.i let her know I saw them and she now fucks him regularly.

BIG Mistake!

When are these wimpy assholes gonna realize that they're playing with fire?
I hope the twat got herself knocked up!

She will be in maternity knickers real soon

Your sexy wife is going to end up with a baby in her married belly if she is not all read pregnant

She will be in maternity knickers real soon

Your sexy wife is going to end up with a baby in her married belly if she is not all read pregnant