Two Friends, Two Fantasies

As per rule 2

Very hot story! Hope to see a sequel!

WoW

great story! hope to hear more.... love the creampie finish and eating

too hot!

thanks for the story. some really hot ideas and descriptions here!
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I loved how oral this was

The rimming, the deep-throating, the creampie eating, the kiss at the end. Fabulous.

Wow!

great story! How wonderful having two fantasies realized at the same time. I look forward to reading more.

Awesome!

Great story. The writer's enjoyment of the fantasy comes through so clearly - makes it very horny to read. Well written too - looking forward to more!

delightful!!

I so enjoyed your story...thank you xoxoxO Lucy

Shower time

I got one for the team by reading this!

Wonderful...

Well written. The flow and use of language is very good. The pace of the narrative is perfect and the description of the sex is fabulous-very hot, extremely sensual and very arousing.

Really good.

Very nicely done hope to see more of your writing. Very erotic and I too love your picture ayou looh absolutly delicious. V

So well done. You have a talent for creating a scene that feels real.

Very hot

Excellent command of detail - I felt like I was there in the room!

Made me very hot.

This is a scenario that I often fantasize about.