Did a retard write this...Worst bit of garbage i ever had the misfortune to lay my eyes on...I feel embarassed for the people who raised you
I thought it was funny and enjoyable. Pure escapist story. Would like to see more.
It was good, in the way it was written, it really was, but the grammar was pretty bad, I mean it didn't even look like you tried to get the spelling and grammar right. The storyline was really great anyways.
but not impossible to believe the stupid troll comments this story got. This is satire, you Giboneys! If you don't know what the word "satire" means, look it up or have someone read it to you from the funny papers. Have you Yahoos no brains at all? The writing is illiterate and the grammar out to lunch because that's the character speaking, that's who she is. I feel, as Mr. Sherlock Holmes once remarked, like a battery pouring electricity into a non-conductor. And I'm sure, Ms. Hall, you feel likewise. Excellent story, better than a lot of published stuff. You got the suburban Cockney just right. ROTFLOL!!!
All in a month's work, eh?
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