All Comments on 'An Incest Birthday Ch. 01'

by kevin_88

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Markco_PoloMarkco_Poloover 13 years ago

have read this story before on another website

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
1st time?

Brother and sister only going out with each other. Neither one having dated much yet they each are very knowledgeable and proficient in oral sex and also how to totally satisfy each other. Not that realistic. Good story line. Think logically, even fanticies should build slowly. Keep writing.

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
Nice Start

For your first story, I think you did a good job. I'll keep my eye out for chapter 2.

lisasmurflisasmurfover 13 years ago
great story,

Twins are in tune with each others in a lot ways that other would never believe ..... looking for the next one!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
rushed

way to rushed this sounds more like a porno than erotica

DBRS

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please learn...

,,,the difference between 'were' and 'we're'.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Anon

God that was bad, Cheesey and every cleche i can think of.

Curious_MarkCurious_Markover 12 years ago
Nice Start

But a nut before finish reading the story.

reader018reader018over 12 years ago
wow!

that was good a start, i hope the rest is just as good if not better!

WalkingTall94WalkingTall94over 12 years ago
X-Box 360

I skipped to the end of this story immediately to tell you you're gay for having an X-Box 360, he's 19, not 9. Anyways, back to the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Awesome!

One of the best stories I have read! Now I am off to read the rest! <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Awesome

I like the story so far... you're not gay for the x-box 360, just the lame game;}

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
ignore the xbox

you guys are a bunch of retards if you focus on the xbox and game. good story by the way

puncturepunctureabout 11 years ago

Loved it. Can't wait to read the rest

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
You stole this

This is from Nivek_88 on stories.xnxx.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
to anon

did you notice Nivek is kevin spelled backwards.? Maybe he posted it on 2 sites. Doesn't mean it was stolen

wolfdragon76wolfdragon76about 9 years ago
Not bad..

Not bad but this sounded more like a generic porn script than a first time between 2 people with no experience at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wait Wut?

How does one win at Mario Bros?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Thief!!!

You stole this off my blog on YouNow, you better not be frofiting off my life stories.

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
AWESOME BROTHER AND SISTER

Sharing their love.

Giving each other everything.

Now what is next ?

kip127kip127about 3 years ago
Such a disappointment

Interesting and fun. Having read most of this series Randy is a loser and cuckold. Ridiculous situations and many bad decisions ruin this once promising story

1958willyboy1958willyboyalmost 3 years ago

i'll give you a spoiler. 35 chapters and it ends in the middle of a story, NO ENDING, just leaves you hanging. decide if you want to spend that much time to just stop in the middle of a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Thanks 1958willyboy, the heads up is much appreciated

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