This is two different stories glued together. Had there been more/better transition from curious to hard core switch it could have been a great story. This did not present as fantasy, so the damn near instantaneous dive into it was unbelievable and maddening. I also have problems with this crowd being neither safe nor fully consenual which makes me question the sane. Alcohol in large quantity, fisting without prep, disreguarding of previously discussed boundries, and really no boundries discussed amongst players. Mentions of safewords don't negate these things. Again, had it been preented as fantasy, then damn the torpedos.....
I've enjoyed bits and parts of this and several of your other pieces. Don't know, I'm just all verklempt....
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Well, I Made It Through The Story
This is two different stories glued together. Had there been more/better transition from curious to hard core switch it could have been a great story. This did not present as fantasy, so the damn near instantaneous dive into it was unbelievable and maddening. I also have problems with this crowd being neither safe nor fully consenual which makes me question the sane. Alcohol in large quantity, fisting without prep, disreguarding of previously discussed boundries, and really no boundries discussed amongst players. Mentions of safewords don't negate these things. Again, had it been preented as fantasy, then damn the torpedos.....
I've enjoyed bits and parts of this and several of your other pieces. Don't know, I'm just all verklempt....
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