but do they belong in the incest category? Sex with cousins is not even illegal in many countries--but of course it's fun anywhere.
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Anonymous12/04/10
How about some introductions?
We know who Sandra is from the setup, but Cindy & Cassandra? They just show up. It's clear Sandra and the narrator know them, but who they are, why they know them, well, it just ain't there. When you want to add characters, give the readers some idea who they are.
Also, when the speaker changes, start a new paragraph.
If you've read the story from chapter 1, you know that Cindy, Jery, and Sandra all work at the Y. I would have assumed if you were following the story line, that a logical explanation about Cassandra is that she works at the Y as well.
Also, if I posted a new paragraph every time there was a different speaker, it would be an entire story of 1 line paragraphs, and no one wants to read a story like that. That's why there are quotation marks and paragraphs like..."Yeah we made her wait at the house. Figured we didn't want to completely blow your mind right off the bat" Sandra said as she pulled on a tiny thong and slid her jeans over her full, tight ass. "Think you can handle three of us?" Cindy asked as she slid her jeans on without any panties. "Who knows?" I replied, "but I'll die trying!"
Every speaker is identified and the stories are easy to follow.
In regards to whether or not these stories fit into the incest category, a simple search over at Dictionary.com defines incest as:
1.sexual intercourse between closely related persons.
2.the crime of sexual intercourse, cohabitation, or marriage between persons within the degrees of consanguinity or affinity wherein marriage is legally forbidden.
In the US where I live, cousins are not allowed to marry, therefore, this would constitute incest.
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Anonymous10/10/13
who the fuck is cassandra?
sandra is his cousin cindy works at the Y but who the fuck is cassandra.
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Enjoyable stories
but do they belong in the incest category? Sex with cousins is not even illegal in many countries--but of course it's fun anywhere.
How about some introductions?
We know who Sandra is from the setup, but Cindy & Cassandra? They just show up. It's clear Sandra and the narrator know them, but who they are, why they know them, well, it just ain't there. When you want to add characters, give the readers some idea who they are.
Also, when the speaker changes, start a new paragraph.
In reply to your comments
If you've read the story from chapter 1, you know that Cindy, Jery, and Sandra all work at the Y. I would have assumed if you were following the story line, that a logical explanation about Cassandra is that she works at the Y as well.
Also, if I posted a new paragraph every time there was a different speaker, it would be an entire story of 1 line paragraphs, and no one wants to read a story like that. That's why there are quotation marks and paragraphs like..."Yeah we made her wait at the house. Figured we didn't want to completely blow your mind right off the bat" Sandra said as she pulled on a tiny thong and slid her jeans over her full, tight ass. "Think you can handle three of us?" Cindy asked as she slid her jeans on without any panties. "Who knows?" I replied, "but I'll die trying!"
Every speaker is identified and the stories are easy to follow.
In regards to whether or not these stories fit into the incest category, a simple search over at Dictionary.com defines incest as:
1.sexual intercourse between closely related persons.
2.the crime of sexual intercourse, cohabitation, or marriage between persons within the degrees of consanguinity or affinity wherein marriage is legally forbidden.
In the US where I live, cousins are not allowed to marry, therefore, this would constitute incest.
who the fuck is cassandra?
sandra is his cousin cindy works at the Y but who the fuck is cassandra.
Oh deep joy !
Being snowed in with three hot, bi-sexual girls.
Talk about Paradise on Earth !
God I'm just so jealous - of a fictional character !
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