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Freedom Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by EroticLitKitty11/08/10

Very sweet beginning

This has the makings of a wonderful story. Can't wait to see where it goes.

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by Anonymous11/08/10

*****

I agree with the first comment. I like all three stories this author has submitted, and have given them all five stars, but in truth the author could be helped by a good editor.

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by Anonymous11/09/10

MORE!!!! :-)

Omg I love this story already! I can't wait to see where these characters go! You should post a new chapter everyday, some people (like myself) would greatly appreciate it. Please and thank you.

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by Anonymous11/10/10

mia

i already love this story and i cant wait to see an update so update soon XD

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by Anonymous11/12/10

PLEASE...

... update soon! I love how they didn't make love in the first chapter. This one is great! Hopefully, in later chapters, we can get more of a description of Daniel's appearence too. Thanks for sharing this, and I can't wait to read more!!!

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by Vestal_Virgin11/21/10

Perfect!

I can't wait for more of this!!!

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by Jujubee5001/11/11

Nice sweet start!

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by Anonymous02/26/13

They didnt have condoms back in the days and soo much more things that you said weren't even invented yet

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by Anonymous04/30/13

@anon re: condoms

This story takes place during the Civil Rights era. Some research suggests that condoms predate the USA.

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