All Comments on 'Ballet Class 101 Ch. 02'

by penny_singleton

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NudyDudeNudyDudeover 13 years ago
Awesome

Love it naked and tie up for women. You have a great sense of story telling.

Bare Hugs

Nudy

tellstory2jaketellstory2jakeover 13 years ago
So intense

Do you wonder how many men will have trouble sleeping tonight?

One most certainly!

- Jake

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great work so far!

Please keep going! Jake should be kept naked with an erection for as long as possible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Creative!

Excellent story, and one that I would love continued on to a series.

I would also like to add an idea, drawn from modern dance. How about having Jake perform in the nude for a public "modern dance" performance, along with all the other costumed ladies?

escriterraescriterraover 13 years ago
Delightful! Erotic! Classy, teasing slow burn as you spin out the story . . .

The possibilities are endlessly stimulating as your readers contemplate what you may have in store for Jake, for the experienced instructor who is clearly comfortable with enjoying the pleasures a naked man at her whim provides, and for the eager coeds who probably have never seen or even thought about the many ways a nude male can provide entertainment of a most erotically arousing nature.

We lucky readers will appreciate and value your imagination as you share with us Jake's fate. We can only hope that his performance eventually earns him an A in the course because he turns out to be such a good student, perhaps becoming at least competent as a dancer, but more importantly, developing into a star pupil at taking directions and pleasing his tutor as well as proving to be a marvelous demonstration subject for the other students.

Teacher knows best, after all, for what a nude male student needs to do in order to pass the class . . .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
A good fantasy...

I love it! It's been a fantasy of mine for a long time to have something like this happen to me.

jane marwoodjane marwoodabout 12 years ago
Excellent of course!

I know it could be left unsaid, but I would love to read further chapter. 5***** work.

spankfunforspankfunforalmost 11 years ago
Lucky Jake!!!

Penny, your story is great but why stop with only 2 chapters. The dance instructor, 12 other women, Jake and I need it to continue! What a beautiful devious mind!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
why did you stop???

what happened to ch 3? we are all waiting to see where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Please finish this

You are leaving us off in the middle, please finish.

DGA2000DGA2000over 9 years ago
Nice touch at the end

Exciting story with the nice touch of setting the stage and leaving the rest to our own imaginations. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great story

To bad this wasnt continued. It's great

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 2 years ago

a little far fetched. he could have worn tights like everyone else, gotten a huge bulge and accidentally cum in his tights in front of the class. maybe every week, LOL

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's not a story. It's a preamble or a tease. It's incomplete. If grading this composition I'd award it a D- with a comment in the margin saying, "interesting beginning, why not finish it?"

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