All Comments on 'Big, Honkin' Slugs: Part 01'

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Anonymousover 13 years ago

Well written, nice build-up

I enjoy the idea of people being stranded and forced to adapt to their surroundings. The story is rather "creepy" to start but at the same time nobody has been injured so far! It is more realistic than an alien abduction story, and certainly much better than anything involving women going to jail and being taken advantage of by unscrupulous guards.

NobleKorhedron over 11 years ago

Intersting....

Interesting story. I'm going to continue reading for now.....

NobleKorhedron about 10 years ago

Bit off the wall....

Having studied Biology myself, I find it difficult to believe that this kind of mutation could happen fore real....

Benzguy280 almost 8 years ago

Tentacles

Oh yeah I see where this story is going. I love erotic stories like this one. Looking forward to reading the rest.

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