All Comments on 'Zane Ch. 04'

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TheIncognito over 13 years agoAuthor

FROM THE AUTHOR

I just recently got internet back onto my computer. And I got a new laptop since the previous one was hacked and all info was lost essentially. What was days worth of Zane writings, I could only salvage a little more than 2 pages worth on here. Hence, chap. 4 was supposed to be a part of chap 3 and more, but Literotica failed to upload it correctly, so I had to make a very very short chap. 4. But I'm working my way back up to speed. Anyways, I want some feedback on what you guys think will happen. Do you think Zane is as innocent as he says? Is Blair holding any secrets? I like to make you guys waiting for more. ;) And if there are any requests for a certain type of story, send me a message!

hisangelbeauty over 13 years ago

grrrrr

mean mean mean writer, i am so addicted to this story omg!!

I think Zane should be innocent just like he claims as for Blair yes maybe a few secrets but nothing so bad that it could keep them apart.

please for teh love of Milke make the next chapter longer if you can.

Anonymousover 13 years ago

mia

i have been waiting so long for this story but it was worth the wait i loved it i cant wait to see the next chapter update soon

cinnamon_kisses12 over 13 years ago

whoo!

hot story indeed! I think Zane has some tricks up his sleeve, especially since he has friends in all sorts of places. He was a cop, therefore there's always a secret. Can't wait to see this relationship bloom between Zane and Blair!

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

This story was amazing, please pleas please continue it. I love it.

Nightpleasure about 13 years ago

Great story. I hope to read more in the recent future.

KittyOh48 over 12 years ago

MORE PLEASE!!!!!

Please give me more and longer chapters. This story is HOT!!!!! Zane and Stormy (Blair) are smokin' together. Please continue and do it soon!

THELOVELY1GLO over 12 years ago

That

was such animalistic sex that it makes you wonder if people Really have this type of sex drive; if so where are the Zanes' at now?

Keep writing and update us soon...

Alpha_Marm about 12 years ago

Nice and nasty the way we all REALLY like it.

Hot damn!!!! Hot diggety damn damn damn. Now that is the kind of fucking I'm taliking about. Who needs hearts and flowers? I'm talking about a working man giving his woman every god damn thing he's got and then some!!!!

He worked that pussy like a starving man ( and he was)and who could be mad at him?

I'm up for seconds.. thirds....anyone else? Let's get that next chapter up soon.