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Zane Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by TheIncognito11/12/10

FROM THE AUTHOR

I just recently got internet back onto my computer. And I got a new laptop since the previous one was hacked and all info was lost essentially. What was days worth of Zane writings, I could only salvage a little more than 2 pages worth on here. Hence, chap. 4 was supposed to be a part of chap 3 and more, but Literotica failed to upload it correctly, so I had to make a very very short chap. 4. But I'm working my way back up to speed. Anyways, I want some feedback on what you guys think will happen. Do you think Zane is as innocent as he says? Is Blair holding any secrets? I like to make you guys waiting for more. ;) And if there are any requests for a certain type of story, send me a message!

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by hisangelbeauty11/13/10

grrrrr

mean mean mean writer, i am so addicted to this story omg!!
I think Zane should be innocent just like he claims as for Blair yes maybe a few secrets but nothing so bad that it could keep them apart.
please for teh love of Milke make the next chapter longer if you can.

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by Anonymous11/14/10

mia

i have been waiting so long for this story but it was worth the wait i loved it i cant wait to see the next chapter update soon

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whoo!

hot story indeed! I think Zane has some tricks up his sleeve, especially since he has friends in all sorts of places. He was a cop, therefore there's always a secret. Can't wait to see this relationship bloom between Zane and Blair!

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by Anonymous01/27/11

This story was amazing, please pleas please continue it. I love it.

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by Nightpleasure03/05/11

Great story. I hope to read more in the recent future.

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by KittyOh4807/26/11

MORE PLEASE!!!!!

Please give me more and longer chapters. This story is HOT!!!!! Zane and Stormy (Blair) are smokin' together. Please continue and do it soon!

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by THELOVELY1GLO12/19/11

That

was such animalistic sex that it makes you wonder if people Really have this type of sex drive; if so where are the Zanes' at now?
Keep writing and update us soon...

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by Alpha_Marm03/12/12

Nice and nasty the way we all REALLY like it.

Hot damn!!!! Hot diggety damn damn damn. Now that is the kind of fucking I'm taliking about. Who needs hearts and flowers? I'm talking about a working man giving his woman every god damn thing he's got and then some!!!!
He worked that pussy like a starving man ( and he was)and who could be mad at him?
I'm up for seconds.. thirds....anyone else? Let's get that next chapter up soon.

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by mimi18607/05/12

Love this

You have to finish!!!

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by Anonymous05/20/13

OMG!!

Please finish. This story is too good.

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by AMHJ8908/18/13

uhh, what happened

you seriously have to continue this story, I feel like i'm being left at the edge of my seat... please please keep going!!

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by Anonymous10/26/13

OMG...NEED TO FINISH PLEASE!!

Pleeeeeeeeease finish this!

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by Anonymous11/29/13

One of the best stories i've read

we need you to continue this story.

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by Anonymous11/29/13

I want Zane to fuck me

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by chocolatesista02/07/14

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE!!!!!!

As do I... Please write more longer chapters soon...

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by Dat_girl09/21/14

finish

Finish

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by ApplejuicexD10/11/14

Omg

What happens next? Do they get caught while there sleeping? Please finish... This is such a badass story

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