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*****
Five stars.
More plz :D
Absolutely great story, can't wait for the rest!!
Great start so far!
Can't wait to read the next installment of these two, you have me interested for more!
So far so good, can't wait for the next update!
mia
nice start i think it will be a great story keep going!
Do more
Great start.
Great start...I hope you decide to add some more on these two....
Please continue this story
Love your stories
this one is no exception. I can't wait to find out if Logan thinks Lauren is just as hot as she thinks he is. I love how she is so mean to him, unlike the rest of the school. Was literally ROTBed laughing at him calling her out in the parking lot and speeding off. I would've been mad too, this mofo got people under the impression that I'd accept a date with his conceited ass. HA
Lol! I love the "it was all a dream" twist. I can't wait to read more.
awsome
Great story and great state to
uhoh
i was thinking this had to be a dream...its too early for that stuff right? lol
thank goodness it was a dream. i actually thought he was raping her.
I just discover this story and I can't wait to read more.
xD nice!
It was a dream. That took me by so much of a surprise xD Seriously, you had me on that one. Good job.
off to a fast start so far
Very hot and descriptive!! Glad it was a dream.
nice
What a relief!
I was reading woith disgust and disdain for this asshole, and then Lauren woke up. Nice job. I doubt anyone saw that coming. The way you had already portrayed him as being so smug and conceited made it believable. I'm glad it was just a dream. I hope there's more to come. There's a great opportunity here for a touching love story.
-_-
She was too easy
ok no
this easy loose pussy bitch ruined the story for me, i thought she was day dreaming, yep i'm stopping here, picking up my books and exiting this library.
Wow
It was a daydream, you jackasses.
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