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Logan and Lauren

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by grunabona11/12/10

*****

Five stars.

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by Anonymous11/12/10

More plz :D

Absolutely great story, can't wait for the rest!!

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by honeybree11/13/10

Great start so far!

Can't wait to read the next installment of these two, you have me interested for more!

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by Hausofgaus11/14/10

So far so good, can't wait for the next update!

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by Anonymous11/14/10

mia

nice start i think it will be a great story keep going!

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by Anonymous11/14/10

Do more

Great start.

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by IrishWelshWench04/25/11

Great start...I hope you decide to add some more on these two....

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by Nightpleasure07/20/11

Please continue this story

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by got2luvmel08/30/11

Love your stories

this one is no exception. I can't wait to find out if Logan thinks Lauren is just as hot as she thinks he is. I love how she is so mean to him, unlike the rest of the school. Was literally ROTBed laughing at him calling her out in the parking lot and speeding off. I would've been mad too, this mofo got people under the impression that I'd accept a date with his conceited ass. HA

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by LadyJuicyGalore10/10/11

Lol! I love the "it was all a dream" twist. I can't wait to read more.

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by Anonymous01/24/12

awsome

Great story and great state to

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by Anonymous01/30/12

uhoh

i was thinking this had to be a dream...its too early for that stuff right? lol

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by emj41702/08/12

thank goodness it was a dream. i actually thought he was raping her.

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by fluer07/22/12

I just discover this story and I can't wait to read more.

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by NeverEndMe08/03/12

xD nice!

It was a dream. That took me by so much of a surprise xD Seriously, you had me on that one. Good job.

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by ScorpMoon09/15/12

off to a fast start so far

Very hot and descriptive!! Glad it was a dream.

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by smexylover10103/10/13

nice

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by quietman20006/26/13

What a relief!

I was reading woith disgust and disdain for this asshole, and then Lauren woke up. Nice job. I doubt anyone saw that coming. The way you had already portrayed him as being so smug and conceited made it believable. I'm glad it was just a dream. I hope there's more to come. There's a great opportunity here for a touching love story.

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by Fiftyshadesofme10/17/14

-_-

She was too easy

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by ladiebrowneyez05/30/15

ok no

this easy loose pussy bitch ruined the story for me, i thought she was day dreaming, yep i'm stopping here, picking up my books and exiting this library.

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by Anonymous09/19/15

Wow

It was a daydream, you jackasses.

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