by Sergio
and I usually like to read about WF/BM pairing, though occasionally I'll take an interest in WM/BF. I'll say your story is interesting, I like that you avoid any 'racial' issues and just focus on beautiful women. It'd be interesting to see Richard accept them on his friends 'recommendation,' and expand the story overall. I think it has potential.
sorry, bud, this story creeps me out ... it is what a typical white perverted guy would do to a couple of naive girls ... the whole thing is just plain creepy.