I don't know if it was the switching from one main character to the other, or having to stop reading and look up the definition of some of the words the author used, was what caused my problem.
Other than that, the chapter is very intense and having a lot of turmoil going on with the characters.
English
Complex Characters
I like that you have such complex and well thought out characters. It is interesting that the story is going into two different story lines.
This chapter seemed to be a little hard to follow
I don't know if it was the switching from one main character to the other, or having to stop reading and look up the definition of some of the words the author used, was what caused my problem.
Other than that, the chapter is very intense and having a lot of turmoil going on with the characters.
Thanks
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