All Comments on 'Magic Panties Ch. 01'

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Dana23Dana23over 13 years ago
very creative!

love the concept!

FRSWRITERFRSWRITERover 13 years ago
love it

very nice like the magical touch

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
Clever

Your idea seems very original, I don't think I've read a story about magic panties before. Looking forward to chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I real wonder where this goes...good start

OldHidekiOldHidekiover 13 years ago
Good Start.

Interested in seeing where this goes.

PepperpuppyPepperpuppyover 13 years ago
Unusual?

I'll keep tuned to see where you go with this one.

cmlvrvacmlvrvaover 13 years ago
Tell me more

Can't wait to see where you go next~~~

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

hummm, every gurl should get such a package in the box and in the dream.

kisses

bobbi

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I want those panties too the entire story.

It turned me on so much i had to pull my panties down and play with my cock through the entire story. I hope he gets his man or woman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Oooooooh!!

Oooooooooh I can't wait to read chapter 2, chapter 1 made me cum hard!!

tturtle50tturtle50over 13 years ago
You caught me too!!

Send the panties to my house next, I really want them now!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
mmmmmmmmmmm

that got me hard lol

the_apocalypsethe_apocalypseabout 13 years ago
nice

I enjoyed that a lot

rm07bsrm07bsabout 12 years ago
Very Hot

I'm really enjoying the beginning of this

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nope

Interesting...but that escalated a bit quickly...maybe a bit too quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Must have

I need a pair of these magic panties!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Spell check!

Oh, c'mon! waste instead of waist? through instead of threw? Can't believe someone made these sorts of errors by mistake or out of sheer ignorance. Story's promising so far but lack of spell checking and such basic mistakes do tend to ruin the experience for me at least, and jolt me out of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Boy was that funny! And bad!

Really, really bad.

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 5 years ago
great start

this is interesting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I'm so hard now

I have read this story so many times now. Every time I imagine myself as being the guy dressed as a french maid, I even bought myself a french maid costume to wear as I play and fantasize about being dominated.

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