White Dicks in Black Men!

Really poor writing :(

more shit from the shithead canadian scumsuckers

you stupid canadian mongrels should be exterminated, like the vermin you all are.

Constructive crit.

Look you either need to write a bio on the area, and leave time for background story or leave it out compleatly because it just distracts from the sex. If you want to be a serious writer you have to accept that formulas exist for a reason. You give us a bio before the emotional/sexual stuff happens so we get the characters... not so much durring though there is room for a little revelation. This way we are involved when things get serious, but arnt distracted... I really didnt need to know that he was from canada while he was balls deep in that beautiful black man.

Extremely racist antiwhite shit

This writer should be banned

Powerful white cock

I too am crazy about white studs. I need more stories like this! Great read!