I really like cousin stories because even though it's taboo, they can get married in real life. In my state California cousins can get married.
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Anonymous05/10/13
yet again
we once again get screwed by a wannabe writer that totally fails to properly finish a story. wheres the background you just rushed through it. wheres the character development you rushed through that also. wheres the end you just left us hanging like 90% of the losers here do. either finish it properly or delete it half a story is worse than no story at all and this is less than half.
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Anonymous10/12/13
agree with "yet again"
plus you need to go back to school and retake sex ed. you called the areola the nipple like the underage virgin you are. nipples are not the size of quarters, areolas yes nipples no. this needs a rewrite by a GOOD WRITER and atleast two more chapters to finish it properly.
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I really like cousin stories because even though it's taboo, they can get married in real life. In my state California cousins can get married.
yet again
we once again get screwed by a wannabe writer that totally fails to properly finish a story. wheres the background you just rushed through it. wheres the character development you rushed through that also. wheres the end you just left us hanging like 90% of the losers here do. either finish it properly or delete it half a story is worse than no story at all and this is less than half.
agree with "yet again"
plus you need to go back to school and retake sex ed. you called the areola the nipple like the underage virgin you are. nipples are not the size of quarters, areolas yes nipples no. this needs a rewrite by a GOOD WRITER and atleast two more chapters to finish it properly.
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