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Visiting Sis Ch. 14

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/15/10

Great Job

I loved the series and you concluded it in a great way. Good job on the whole series.

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by modern199011/16/10

DAMN!

that is some fucking story thank you so much for writing it. you have one fucking gift.

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by Anonymous12/13/10

Hot Hot!

Great story, thanks! I liked the progression of the relationships and naughtiness! :) Well Done. Thanks again.

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by Anonymous07/29/12

the best fucking sister/brother/sister incest story that ive ever read

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by Anonymous03/01/15

Long story

This is a very long and entertaining story that I enjoyed reading. I noticed that the farther you got into the tale the articles got somewhat shorter. Did you just get tired of writing the stories or did you run out of ideas?
You might want to let someone go through your submissions before you publish them because I noticed several "typo's" or incorrect wording. Not a complaint, just a suggestion.

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by Anonymous12/15/15

Long but wonderful tale

I really enjoyed reading your story but was a little bit disappointed with the ending. It seems like you could write many more chapters about this growing situation.
There were a few "typos" that might need to be corrected or at least have one of the members who volunter their services to edit your writing.

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by Orion201201/13/16

Feedback appreciated

As always, public feedback is appreciated. Sometimes, what starts out as a short story ends up being something bigger than you could have imagined, or intended. I apologize for the typo's and will try to do better in the future. I realize that it has been a while since I've submitted anything. I have been working on several stories; some long, some short. I felt bad about submitting the start of Visiting Sis before it was completely finished. That is why the end seems a little rushed. I will eventually submit more stories, but if they're in multiple parts, they will be finished before the first part is submitted. Once again, thanks. - Orion2012

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