On SOL, one can read chapters 1 thru 4, but the story ends there. I hope JPB finishes it on Lit with one or more chapters so we get to the conclusion. I almost think this is satire. As I commented previously, it is clear in many JPB stories that: 1) All women are sluts for big cock and will cheat, given the chance, 2) Guys are clueless regarding their women and their cheating, and, 3) Men are helpless before an inviting pussy . . . What I'm wondering is, will JPB create a confrontation where the truth emerges and it all comes out into the open? Or will everything remain the same, with all the cheaters getting away with their cheats, and no one the wiser? Thanks for writing.
This too hilarious not to finish. Humor and satire would be a way way better place for this story. DAM -- just finish this the way I hope you will or Mandy just might.
It's been on SOL since 2008 incomplete and in-active, so I doubt it will be completed here. JPB is just slowly copying everything from SOL to Lit for some reason.
I like the story, but not the unfinished version (4 chapters) on at least two sites, including Literotica. I now note Chapter 1 has been posted on another site - will that be an unfinished version also just to continue re-posting old stories. I hope not.
You turd! Ya did it again! I'm gonna have to start reading the last page of your stories to keep from being had. Good read. What a skanky slut. Tsk, Tsk. Cheers!
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Anonymous10/07/14
And half the people viewing the wedding stood up
And yelled out -"HELL YES WE OBJECT!" That was the end of the wedding. Geez Bob, this was awful.
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Anonymous10/18/14
Hey anon 10/7/14..
That was damn near exactly what I was going to say. You are one smart sum beach.
a real ending, but this was plenty good enough. I would be interesting, however, if JPB or someone else continued this story. Is Duece the only one with decent morals?
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Anonymous09/06/15
to be continued?
Well I enjoyed the half story. Don't suppose you will ever bother to write the last half.
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Anonymous09/16/15
This is over. Both from the stories point of view
And from JPB's point of view. The story? As others pointed out, everybody objected. So the marriage never took place. As to a continuation of the story by JPB? NEVER going to happen. If you've read a few of Bob's stories you know he makes no apologies for what he writes or how he finishes his stories. He has NEVER come back to a story and added another chapter. So this story is over and done with. To quote Bob - "The ending takes place in the readers mind". Yeah I know - fuck that shit!
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Anonymous06/21/16
since jpb writes to a target audience
Job says he writes for a target audience...himself. I'm surprised all aren't posted in gay male since jpb is the biggest queer on lit
when JPB decides to write for you no-life whackjobs , I'll send you a personal text. Now go read some Stangstar, beat off and fall asleep watching some baseball with a warm malt liquor by your side.
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Anonymous11/21/16
So Jason is fucking all the women in the family.
His wife will fuck anything that breathes. Mom always at least one if not two on the side. Dad is only kinky enough to fuck his wife and his son's wife. The son's wife is a size queen, sets up junior as a cuckold to raise daddy's kid.
What the hell happened to junior?
He is such a wimp he can only "make love" to his wife.
Some body did'nt raise him right!!!!!!!
English
WOW!!!!!
This still belongs in the Humor category, really a great series.
Oh Well!!!!!
The real Bob's back!!!!!
Mom, daughter and future son in law need to talk
It seems that the shit is about to hit the fan. I wonder if mom will be able to keep her mouth shut until the wedding is over?
This story was on SOL but incomplete . . .
On SOL, one can read chapters 1 thru 4, but the story ends there. I hope JPB finishes it on Lit with one or more chapters so we get to the conclusion. I almost think this is satire. As I commented previously, it is clear in many JPB stories that: 1) All women are sluts for big cock and will cheat, given the chance, 2) Guys are clueless regarding their women and their cheating, and, 3) Men are helpless before an inviting pussy . . . What I'm wondering is, will JPB create a confrontation where the truth emerges and it all comes out into the open? Or will everything remain the same, with all the cheaters getting away with their cheats, and no one the wiser? Thanks for writing.
Don't quit now.
This too hilarious not to finish. Humor and satire would be a way way better place for this story. DAM -- just finish this the way I hope you will or Mandy just might.
This wasn't added to complete the series...
It's been on SOL since 2008 incomplete and in-active, so I doubt it will be completed here. JPB is just slowly copying everything from SOL to Lit for some reason.
Continuation of an Unfinished Story??
I like the story, but not the unfinished version (4 chapters) on at least two sites, including Literotica. I now note Chapter 1 has been posted on another site - will that be an unfinished version also just to continue re-posting old stories. I hope not.
you really need to continue this
The chain of events are humourous - and demand resolution. You have my applause ;)
Normally, I'd be infuriated by an ending like this...
...but with this shitty story, a non-ending seemed to fit.
****
You turd! Ya did it again! I'm gonna have to start reading the last page of your stories to keep from being had. Good read. What a skanky slut. Tsk, Tsk. Cheers!
And half the people viewing the wedding stood up
And yelled out -"HELL YES WE OBJECT!" That was the end of the wedding. Geez Bob, this was awful.
Hey anon 10/7/14..
That was damn near exactly what I was going to say. You are one smart sum beach.
tom anon
I would have preferred
a real ending, but this was plenty good enough. I would be interesting, however, if JPB or someone else continued this story. Is Duece the only one with decent morals?
to be continued?
Well I enjoyed the half story. Don't suppose you will ever bother to write the last half.
This is over. Both from the stories point of view
And from JPB's point of view. The story? As others pointed out, everybody objected. So the marriage never took place. As to a continuation of the story by JPB? NEVER going to happen. If you've read a few of Bob's stories you know he makes no apologies for what he writes or how he finishes his stories. He has NEVER come back to a story and added another chapter. So this story is over and done with. To quote Bob - "The ending takes place in the readers mind". Yeah I know - fuck that shit!
since jpb writes to a target audience
Job says he writes for a target audience...himself. I'm surprised all aren't posted in gay male since jpb is the biggest queer on lit
@ previous homophobic anonymous hard man comment
when JPB decides to write for you no-life whackjobs , I'll send you a personal text. Now go read some Stangstar, beat off and fall asleep watching some baseball with a warm malt liquor by your side.
So Jason is fucking all the women in the family.
His wife will fuck anything that breathes. Mom always at least one if not two on the side. Dad is only kinky enough to fuck his wife and his son's wife. The son's wife is a size queen, sets up junior as a cuckold to raise daddy's kid.
What the hell happened to junior?
He is such a wimp he can only "make love" to his wife.
Some body did'nt raise him right!!!!!!!
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