by GGandG
i was getting a massage when i too experienced the thrill a a big hard cock.since then i have gotten more massages.
Well, stories like this one only make me want to cry. Pity you are warp nature of d/s scene :(
Very good. Keep up the good work. And ignore the wicked witch comment (most likely named after the witch from Oz who wanted to murder a little girl so she could get her shoes - which is apparently fine and worthy of naming yourself after). In works of fiction all scenarios are possible and up for exploration - and like in Oz, nobody is getting hurt. Nothing wrong here. :)
Looking at the wicked... comment below--forget that crap! Not every story is for every reader, but my main criticism on this one is that it's too short. I wanted more after the brother and other guys walked out, leaving Scott to his delicious fate.
Loved it, the image of "pure testosterone incarnate" was very sexy and arousing. Nothing hotter than a dad and his lad.
Could have made a bit more use of the sensuality of the leather.
Still a great wee tale though, very nice.
if my brother did that to me , ad slit his throat.? what a cunts trick.? wheres part two.?
I liked the scene, it was hot. But you definitely need to read your own story after you've written it. Charlie's name changed at least three times during that story. He has been called; Charlie, Gladiator and Aaron. Quite an obvious mistake and you clearly haven't read your own work, disappointing.
seriously needs a part 2 where the brother and his friends get it, too only worse. aaron should offer to help scott get his revenge, and turning out all those assholes would be perfect, especially on camera. can anyone say "orgy- time"? and the blackmail potential. oh god, it would be fucking fantastic, and so hot. mmm
Oh man, my virgin ass is hot for cock. My cock is hot for cock. This piece makes a straight cock at least twitch for the pleasure of another cock. Yah, after reading this, I want a man to work his hard cock up my tight virgin ass and give me his hot cum. My ass is clearly cherry ripe and ready for a hot cock.
Great story but one thing is someone needs to check the names of the characters, at one point Jeremy is called Robert
Hot story. I fantasize about different ways I could be tricked / coerced in to having my first gay experience - either sucking a big hard cock or having my ass fucked. I would prefer a sexy woman to trick me into doing something while she watched , but this would work too.
Would love to trade places with Scott, but would hope the other guys would stick around and take their turns with my no longer virgin ass, and introduce my mouth to their cocks.
Always love reading this story definitely 1 of my favorites!! Gets me hard everytime!
I think that Scott needs to learn to
wear panties and dance for the guys
and in so doing gets them all so hard that
he has to take more than one at a time.
Hot story. And after Scott leaves the room he has
to go back into the bar where he will get a chance
to suck on some hard cocks. He will get his own
leash and his master will lead him about and offer
his mouth so he gets to swallow lots of warm cum.
Sucking a cock with so many other guys watching ...
Fucking amazing should make a sequel or more just like it. It's amazing hot and sexy I love the idea of tricking and a bachelor party. I think you should mak one exactly like it.
it was good but you need to keep your names right, at the end "Charlie" turned to "Aaron".
As above
Awesome story!!!! So HOT!!!! I`d LOVE to have something like that happen to me, especially when he sunk his huge cock balls deep in his ass!!! I would cum hands free too!!! Please write more!! My underwear is soaked with pre cum
It definitely is not US Marine Core unless you're thinking about something other than a military organization. It's the United States Marine Corps. Correct spelling is key in this situation even though "core" and "corps" have similar pronounciations.
I really want to like this story. I've read it every time I come across it thinking, "Oh I liked the premise, and it got me horny", and then I hit the misspellings and the incongruities (who's Gladiator?) I really wanted to give this a 5, but only a 2, I'm afraid.
Hmmmm.....My cock is hard and I want to be fucked like the person in the story!!......Totally believable and extremely hot!!! Wow!! Wow!! Wow!!
Afterwards Scott's brothers friends come back and he is in the bar, almost naked, just wearing some pink panties. They see him and make fun of him, playing with his ass. His master offers him to them and two of them take him back to the room where he gets double-teamed with a cock in his ass and mouth. He loves taking so much cock.
happen to me years ago only thing i had been fucked before 4 or 5 times but this time i got owned by a man with a 8 inch cock