great start please keep it up xx
This is an excellent first offering, and My thanks for sharing it with us. I would like very much to hear of Bobby's adventures with this formidable lady. It's the old, old story - be careful what you wish for...
So keep it going!
I like the start. Sounds very similar to what My Pet and I built up to. Please keep writing.
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great start please keep it up xx
A fine introduction
This is an excellent first offering, and My thanks for sharing it with us. I would like very much to hear of Bobby's adventures with this formidable lady.
It's the old, old story - be careful what you wish for...
Wanna see where it goes...
So keep it going!
Very Nice
I like the start. Sounds very similar to what My Pet and I built up to. Please keep writing.
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