All Comments on 'A Tempting Vacation Ch. 12'

Loving the latest chapter.

Interesting direction with the sex drugs / bdsm twist but I definitely think it's not going in an unwelcome direction. Looking forward to two things: Sue's unplanned seduction of Ron as well as Tom's new confidence taking on Beth.

I love the whole story. But the last chapter is the best.

I hope for more!

I agree with an earlier commenter - the story is heading away from what made it great.

Get back to the 4 main characters

Definitely get back to main characters. But I love these stories!!!!

with the people that say getting away from the core is bad. Yes the Ron-Beth-Pam tease is the heart and soul of the story, but I have no problem getting away from it to keep it interesting. Plus, and most importantly, characters such as the co-eds were introduced, to not give them their due would have left the story feeling empty. And now I'm waiting to see where Sue and the mom from the shop fit in. Pam-Ron is the climax of this whole story and JackKing is nothing if not great at building anticipation. Been waiting 7 years to see the end of this story. I have no problem waiting a while longer if it means getting a few side adventures

but can't wait to have Pam back in the frame -- and for her finally to consummate her longing for Ron.

The more I think about this story the more I love it. Can't wait to read your next chapter! (Also I love the branching out to other women, particularly when Beth plays a role in that teasing - it's like the best of both worlds to have the main female characters set up other women to get into sexy situations with Ron).

I'm dying to read the next chapter 13. Can't wait until it is released. Any timeframe?

The hottest story I´ve ever read. Is there more to come? When? Please go on...

Wow cant wait for the next part ch 13

hot stuff....keep it going

Best I have ever read. Thanks!

love the way ron is being teased. can't wait for the results of this "shower"

Aaaaarghh not another long hiatus that's just cruel.......

I'm dieing here. Can't wait for Chapter 13!

I'm quite impressed by your writing. I was overjoyed that you continued the best story on this site!

Keep it up (pun intended)!

Love the perpetual teasing for climax... great writing.

I find myself stuck with everyone else finally coming back each day to check and see if the next chapter is out. I even took the liberty of checking all the comments and am glad that i found this now while you are on a roll.

As to the story wow amazing. i love how the teasing from chapter to chapter builds tension and then you throw in a chapter that sets it off like time bomb.

As to the new direction if this was kinda a way to tie up the lose ends with the co-eds and give a it something a bit different nice. Hope it goes back to the heart of the story that makes it so great tho.

Congrats on the amazing story. First that has forced me to feel like i have to leave a comment.

Great story....when is Chapter 13 (and beyond?) coming out?

Neeeed the next chapter! This is the best series I've ever read on here, I check daily waiting for the next chapter, please write it soon!

Need next chapter desparately , plz plz

I'm beginning to think that Jack's whole goal is to tease us in the same way that his characters tease one another. Great story, can't wait to read more.

Great story. Still waiting for Ch. 13. Can't wait till it comes out.

Such an excellent series, the best i have ever read. I check in every week or so desperately awaiting chapter 13 and hopefully beyond.

Kudos.

dude you have one helluva imagination!