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All Comments on 'Nikki's Doctor Visit Ch. 01'

by submissivelittleme

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PepperpuppyPepperpuppyover 13 years ago
An AVERAGE start!

No other comment is needed. AVERAGE says it all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Much too short...this is more like an intro to a chapter. There was not enough story to get into.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Be positive

Please keep going give us all the detail

hjennifer98hjennifer98over 13 years ago
Much better than an average start

I really think that this a better than average start to a story. The gramar is much better than a lot of stories that I have seen lately and the plot is very good. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

superstitionsuperstitionover 13 years ago
Hot

Please keep going!!! Much much better than average!

thecurioussubmissivethecurioussubmissivealmost 11 years ago
Love it!!

Great start, I really hope you write the next part soon!!

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