All Comments on 'Nymphocom Ch. 04'

Why would he just leave her? He should keep her around for both brain and body! She sounds like the perfect woman, so if the hero is so brilliant, didn't he see her for the opportunity she is?

What about the hostess? hopefully she will come play too.

"I was too impatient to meet Sofia Valentine so I did not really cared about this hot girl." I think you should write "I didn't really care" or "I cared not" ( first is better ).

Same problem : "She did not seemed scared but rather pleasantly surprised". Should be : "She did not seem..." ( or didn't seem ).

Chuck 0032. ( Same person as for ankles/hips in chapter 2).

And later in this chapter, about serving snacks over "tablets", it should be "trays", I think.

Again, mere details, and your story is pleasing me much. The pictures are lovely, and bring nice sensations. Thanks !