Bound to My Mate Ch. 15

was a great chapter

well actually beyond great well written and most enjoyable . this should be interesting when they confront those wolves

Keep 'em coming

This is such a well written, well balanced story that is as good as any published book that I have ever bought in a store. Pack life has so many different layers in your writing and continues to evolve in your story. I'm always waiting for what will happen next. And when I'm finished, anxious for the next chapter.

Love it!

I have a feeling that Joel's pack is going to increase by four. They don't sound like bitter rogues they sound more like caring brothers with no pack of their own maybe because that didn't want to leave their sister. Looking forward to the next chapter to get some answers. Can't wait!!!

Wow...

Nice curve ball Doc... wasn't seeing that one coming at all! So, without saying, the next step is crucial in determining who is the monster and who is the man ... and I can't wait!

Thanks for posting.

Oh wow!

I just love this story. It feels like we are taking a peak into real pack life, its so interactive. I wonder how this new revelation will play out and I really hope Lucas doesn't have to suffer anymore. Awesode stuff.

Cliff hanger!

I love the way you are writing this, I look for your next chapter every week. This weeks chapter has made come back twice since I read it in hopes that a fee more words would "magically" appear. I want to know what happens next!

Well done!

Every week you have me hooked and needing to read the next installment. Please keep up the storytelling! Thank you.

Questions Not Answers

The more you reveal the more you ask. This week you leave me with "who is the monster"? I wonder if there is a monster at all. And poor Lucas, has he found his mate or is this just his first experience with the naked flesh? See more questions. I love the way you are writing this. Please keep going.

I like the strange twists thrown in like Lucas thinking this girl is his mate and the wierd way these rogues are acting with their 'sister'
I just hope Lucas isn't hurt any more. He's been through so much already.
Something is making me wonder if the original witches are playing a part. The old ones whose niece was the first witch to attack them with the rogues.
Anyhow, I also like that Elizabeth is still learning to be the best alpha she can be and I like when Joel teaches her as they go. It would stand to reason that she never had time to really learn everything about a were's life b/c of the problems from day 1. I like seeing that she's still learning despite doing a good job as alpha.

interesting

This is an interesting turn of events. Can not wait to see what happens. I am thinking that she really is there sister and that she was born with out a wolf. thank you for sharing Mechmanas

I love it

\this story has such twist and turns, it has got me hooked.
please write the next chapter soon.

Simply Perfect

Perfection in its simplest form!!!

Hi

I've just read your story from the beginning to where it is now - it's taken me most of the day lol! I'm amazed by your development as a writer - it started off as a fairly amateur posting (says one who has never posted and couldn't imagine doing any better than you) to something that is assured, confident and from a bloody good writer, actually :)

Really keen to see what happens next

fantabulous

I have been reading for hours as I just found this story today. And I am so glad I did. Your talent has grown and blossomed. I love this story and will be checking frequently for the new chapters. Thanks for sharing with us. Kate - aka mikothebaby

I absolutely love this story. The more I read it the more intrigued I get and can't wait to see what will happen next.

Awesome

so very hooked! read the whole thing before posting.Very intriguing and im so anxious for more! well done!

even better than before

and i do hope that lucas is this girls mate( and the other way around) he needs it

Fantastic Read!

This is the best free series I've read online. With some minor proofreading and editing, I would expect this to be published--I would certainly purchase it! I am also impressed with the speed at which you put out new chapters, and that each one is still of great quality...can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh My God!!

I just found your stories tonight and I've read through ALL OF THEM in one sitting. It's now pushing 2 in the morning and I have to go to work at 5!

I'm am hooked! I'll be checking back often for the next chapters!

Great job on creating and maintaining this world. I've really enjoyed reading these.

i cant wait for the next chapter thank you for the great story

aww

poor lucas :( (amazing story btw haha)

AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I atarted reading your story yeaterday and I have not been able to stop....LOL
I want to know everthing that happens next. I hohpe it will be a very long one or have more to come after the las chapter.
PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING.....LOVE IT

Dry opinion

Too much explanation.

Love the twists

I really appreciate what you are doing with your storyline, it makes for an excellent read!

Okay, the obligatory sex just to keep us interested....

....as you develop characters, plot, whatever. If you weren't so good on the sex part, I'd say this blows. When I want my fantasy, I'll read fantasy, when I want my sex, I read literotica. Now the sex part was good, but not great....I'm sticking with this...cuz...well actually...it worked. I'm hooked. FUCK..there better be more sex!

great twist

Hey just found your story and can't put it down, great twist with lucas. keep up the great writing!

xoxo

love it keep up the good work. If you want just sex there are many more stories. This whole story has a good combo of both.

I'm liking this chapter

This is perhaps my favourite chapter so far for the character development and the twists with Lucas and with Cindy's brothers! Now I'm really curious about who these guys are! You're a master storyteller!

I can't believe...

... That I waited this long to read the doc's older story. I've been missing out.

I've just had a revelation!!

You have a fantastic imagination, and then the writers skill to weave it into a story. Then you add a certain amount if "glue" to it to make it stick to your readers minds, then another "magic ingredient" to make it addictive. As Len on DWTS would say, and I think it is appropriate, "Good job dog"! PS. Is your baby ever going to have some great fairy tales.

YAY!

The second u mentioned the small pack with the human woman I knew something special was planned for them! I cannot wait to se how u play it out!

Damn DrW!

I owe you more 5's and a lot of rave comments, but I can't stop reading long enough to force myself to pay up :( I promise I will go back and rate all I have missed when I am done reading the story. I know this is an old one and you may not be reading these comments any more, but this is really fine work. I don't even notice the sex scenes as they are so well integrated into the tale (tail? ;p )

I also strongly approve of the way you are keeping control of the story so that it doesn't spin out crazily with fantastic powers that soon escape your imagination and, OF COURSE, ours too.

This is good shit, Maynardia. Please keep on keepin' on, Lynn

i love your stories

Ive read this story like a million times and I still come back for more.its powerful and is a great read every time if you post somewhere else let me know please I would love to read more @Madam pink22

Ahhh Lucas

I'm so rooting for the gentle giant, Lucas. He deserves someone special.

Thanks

I'm in too deep to quit now.

I am REALLY enjoying this story! Thank you so much!