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Good so far!
Can't wait to read part II! (I'm kind of hoping she ends up fucking him, although sloppy seconds are my favorite, her doing Rick while her husband isn't there is hot too!)
On a less exciting note, very well written.
A good start
This has real possibilities - i like the believable conversation and the build-up. Keep going.
Dumb
Lots will love it. But it is just the same old self-cuckolding shit.
You're cuckold aren't you sick one?
So this gets you off does it? Letting someone else take what is yours and never give it back, once that line is crossed your marriage will never be the same again.
To be a cuckold is bad enough, but to be a willing cuckold that has to be the sickest thing in the world.
Seek help real soon.
Good first chapter
Well written dialogue. The writer is very good at communicating sexual tension with dialogue...hope the next chapter isn't too cliched...heading down that path though.
Didn't like the story...
And, didn't like the style. sorry.
Excellent erotica. That's why I'm on this site isn't it?
Some of you asexual negative cunts want to find a better hobby. Sad nofucks.
If you gave some background, say an analysis of the various....
....material and behavioral conditions that led to the development of the need to self flagellate by imploding one's marriage this might draw one in better. It seems like intro # 97846-c of the road to cuckdom.
WOW!!!!!!!!
SUPER HOT STORY SO FAR!!!!
Excellent Start
Welcome back. You're the best on this site. Ignore the negative comments. If some guys don't like the theme, why do they read it? I wish you would finish Joes Service. For that matter, you could add another episode to A Woman of Her Word. Keep up the good work.
Great story and great to see you back here.
My only problem with your stories is that I wish there were more of them! Terrific work as usual, please post the next chapter as soon as you can.
Crap
Another soon to be dick sucker by proxy cuck story . uno starro
It's wierd.
I've never understood the people who read a "loving wives" story, knowing exactly what it's going to be about and then post negative comments because of what it's about. If it's not your cup of tea, don't read it, but if you do, it's stupid to complain about it.
And anyone who feels compelled to denigrate someone else's sexual preferences is obviously insecure about his own.
Re:Richard_f
Your profile states you are into and take part in the 'Cuckold' lifestyle. That tells everyone exactly what type of 'man' you are. You and a few sick freaks have this way of life that is not how most men live their lives.
Being a cuckold is a sick fetish and can only be cured by a slow and painful death. I hope you and this writer find that cure real soon.
Great story
Great story, can't wait for part two.
terrific!
what a great introduction! stop teasing us and give us the next chapter asap
When do we get the 2nd part?
When are you going to complete the second part of this story. Hopefully sooner than the completion of Joe's Service!!
Part 2 Please!!
Campo you are the best LW author here. You capture the budding angst in a way noone else does--please don't make us wait too long for part 2!
Beautiful beginning
You have a magic way with words, I can't wait to read the next part!
Always great work from Campo ....
.... always well-written and compelling to this reader. The secret is in the dialogue, and Campo takes the time to setup his stories beautifully. Awaiting the finish... and agree that a chapter 3 to WOHWord would be a welcome addition. WOHWord best storytelling on the site...bar none.
great work
ignore the haters for they know not what they say.
your stuff is hot and brilliant! please chapter 3 to woman of her word and complete this one.
God,I just love some anons comments !
Viz one below. A man with a sense of humor !
Hot but familiar
I like the story and the premise; but the dialog is awfully similar to the other story, which I also enjoyed.
Benn waiting too long...
Loved WOHW and would love to see CH. 3 as well as CH.2 of this one. Glad you're back!
More you tease!
I love your stories and I agree with the requests for Ch 2 (and 3, etc) here and Ch 3 of WOHW!!
a year
and we still haven't gotten part II. Campo is a tease.
Would it continune?
First of all, congratulations for the excellent story you have written.
How is the continuation?
Best regards
great story
This is a great story well done. However, you left with a cliff hanger please make a second part. If there is another part but by a different author please point in the direction I would like to see the ending. overall very well done.
Finnish
Great story please finnish it
gave 5 stars
Where is part too? Excellent work, finish the story please
please finish this!
Great story..feels very real
GREAT start
What happened to chapter 2 & 3? A great start!
What a deranged drivel !
This shit couldn't get any worse. -1* !
please write the second part soon!
This is great I want part 2.
☆☆☆☆☆ THE WIFE IS A KEEPER. SHE WILL SUCK RICK'S DICK AS LONG AS DAVE & BECKY CAN NOT SEE THE ACTION. I WISH SHE WERE MY WIFE...
The author very realistically depicts the feeling & the thoughts of a voyeur husband.
It is his ultimate dream to share his wife with another man.
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