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Darth_Fuguealmost 13 years ago"Oh, Yes!!!"
The Plot was BRILLIANT — a woman who's brainwashed, into submission by, who it turns out to be (in the end), her roommate!
Talk about "Co-Ed!" ;-D
liz33ndabout 8 years agoI love the idea, altho this story was a little hard to follow for me anyway.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoPlot twist!
I was expecting a plot twist, but I wasn't expecting this! They really are your forte. Brilliant, as always.
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