Company Christmas Party

Merrry Christmas!!

Great story, Karen is definitely a fun girl, I would love to party with her!

Very hot with the bi-twist!

Good ideas, work a little on flow

I really liked a lot of the ideas in this story - especially the bi element and the way the female character took charge - but the style made it difficult for me to really get wrapped up in it. A run-on sentence is annoying and there are uses for terse staccato, but this took it a bit to far. Ideas seemed disjointed and the action wasn't smooth to read because of the extremely short, simple sentences. I still liked it though!

This a a story that

I would like to be part of. Its hot. Not too long and not too short. Just enough to get me really worked up. I am still hard from reading the story. :)

yes

awsome...sounds like great fun...

I would love to be him

I love licking pussy and I love having a hard cock deep in my ass. This would be the ultimate for me.

Merry Christmas

Now that's an office Christmas Party!

awesome story

I enjoyed the story and it had me very hard. Kind of intriqued by having the sub involved and not too sure about the idea of getting it in the ass but otherwise would love to be involved in a party like this.

Hot!Hot!Hot!

Great story line with lot's of twists and interests. It has me breathing hard and feeling wet. Loved it!

Yes please!

Cheri, this is HOT! Clark Griswold and I would love to live this fantasy out with you.

got aroused

The idea of a straight man being introduced to bisexuality by a domme seems to be a common fantasy. It is a theme that I enjoy.

mmm

What a story...