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What a Wonderful, Wintry Feeling

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/17/10

Great, but watch the grammar

"They" should be "he", "them" should be "him", "it's" should be "its" (unless you mean "it is"), and so on. Keep an eye on the grammar and story will flow better.

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by Anonymous11/19/10

You lost me at...

"Not too bad looking for an 83 year old man."

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by jonathanlovescock07/20/12

83 yrs old put me off there and then.?

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