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Well done
Congratulations on finishing 3 chapters in a matter of weeks, was great not to have wait it out for the end. Is there going to be another chapter? Glad you didn't make us wait and hope you still had the time to finish your term paper.
Words of praise & encouragement
"...the hours of soft shadows..." such a beautiful & evocative phrase. You are a talented writer & I encourage you to submit your writings to publishers. I look forward to reading the remainder of your submissions.
Exquisite
Your writing deserves more attention and appreciation than it is receiving. Such a wonderful story to go unnoticed. Never stop writing! Xo
*sigh*
I'm so very glad you stuck to their relationship without giving us a while account of the wars ect . Wonderful :-)
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