All Comments on 'Twist of Fate'

So he got to have sex with the new gf, then when he's done she gets up an leaves with the old gf.

Nice, he got off and didn't have to listen to her yap on after he was done with her. Score! A perfect night out!

Not sure what story Anon below read but player didn't have sex with new gf, he didn't even get to cum. Old girl used him to get herself off and then bounced with the ex gf. Try reading through instead of skimming, tard.

Your stories always give us such great characters, and this is no exception. In such few words you made us really like the narrator and the new girl. Boy do I want to follow them home. Great writing Kat! Thank you

nice imagination, nice plot development, nicely written. very well done.

Being an asshole never pays off....When will my brethren ever learn!!

Vivid images and wonderful characters...an Excellent Story,

Now, where is part-2??

Jen, loved this story. Something about being watched or watching is just so erotic. Amanda

I need...more thumbs....*grabs 2 other people..thumbs up with me!

They throw their thumbs up

Watching and being watch is hot. Public sex is hot. Revenge is a dish best served cold. Three out of three is terrific.

I liked the twist at the end. Nothing like a little "just reward" Good job, five stars.

It was if I was there, gawd it's close to something that happened to me, hope you had the same experience that planted that seed.

Ha ha now that’s poetic justice !!! Loved the story and found absolutely no flaws ! Great work !

That was sweet! Perfect retribution against a wretched tool. I found this gem when I clicked the links in your forum signature. Thanks! I think it deserves a higher rating. :)