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by Metamorphose11/22/10

Odd choice of tense

A bit annoying.
It had potential – the beginning showed you can write, show emotions, build characters and characteristics.
Then came the sex part – mechanics without much sense and without building a minimal care between me (reader) - and the protagonist. So I didn’t care and stopped reading.

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by RossDaniels11/22/10

Partially agree with previous comment

I don't like the "I" and "you" approach. However, thought the story was pretty hot, otherwise.

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by canda05/18/12

:-)

Wow, that was hot!!!!

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