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Hot Stuff!
A very enjoyable story, for which many thanks. You have a great imagination - a little more attention to spelling and grammar would have given this story 5 *s - as it stands, 4 - well done.
traci
To dominate
We all know it is our place to dominate, which turned out to be a great story. Keep this up and we will all love you, More please!
good
Very realistic story, personally would have found it hotter if he wasn't quite so willing to do every single thing. Every guy who's ever done it knows eating your cum shortly after climax isn't something you usually jump all over.
I also felt the Mistress was a little too light on him. Not letting him cum after she had would have been hot. He got off too easily.
Watch Your Viewpoints
Going from third to first person is confusing. Needs a light copyedit also. That said, good and hot.
When he stood up
and realized the abuse and humiliation she had put him through, he realized as a man he still had some pride and self respect. He proceeded to pound the snot out of here before he left her, bleeding , on the floor as he walked out never to return.
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