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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone11/21/10

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this is prose with line breaks, not poetry, not bad, but not poetry at least none that I can find

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by vrosej1011/21/10

I kind of agree, but I loved it anyway.

The definition of poetry can be very subjective but it really worked for me as a piece of art, so i loved it anyway. Dreams can be so weird; I spent a substaintial portion of last night yelling at a department store manager for calling my neice a cat baby....

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